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The author decreasesthe intelligence of character to fit the rather forced plot. Out of nowhere the author also decided to include a pregnancy plot and nake Gwen pregnant and with everything I have seen till now I am 100% sure that the author is going to use the kid to milk needless drama for the sake of drama.

The writing quality of the fanfic is atrocious and I don't mean it grammar wise. What I mean is that the author tries to use philosophical quotes to fill word count and stretches a monologue from few sentences to entire paragraphs. The MC constantly uses quotes or talks about philosophy for no reason other than to seem like a deep-thinker/intelligent/wise and I can't believe I am saying this but it comes cringe worthy. The story is moving at glacial speed. If it was a slow-paced story I would be fine with it, but it is not. I read it till chapter 15. 3 noteworthy things happened 1. The mc transmigrated , 2. We had a little training montage and 3. The mc left the island. All of that took 15 chapters and 80% of the chapters were full of useless monologues where the mc tries to appear philosophical. All of the 'action' could have taken maximum of 3 chapters if you remove the useless monologues. What made me quit however was the fact that author pulled the cheapest nerf/plot-point/plot-device or whatever you want to call it by making the MC lose his FUCKING ARM. How? Well the mc's ship got attacked by a sea king and our 'smart' mc jumped from the side that the sea king was and lost his arm. This is quite possible the dumbest and forced thing I have seen in a while. Let me remind you the author filled the previous chapters with useless monologues to portray our mc as someone who is smart, has experience out in the wild, knows that he is in One Piece, which means he knows about the sea kings. So instead of training like he used to do in the 3 months that he was there and hunting fish for food and etc. He because of some bullshut timer that he doesn't know anything about makes off screen a boat and sails away knowing about the dangers of the sea and not preparing for them. AND Timer that I talked about before says that he has 1 YEAR and he only wants like 3 MONTHS before goes out to the sea while KNOWING about the dangers. After all of that the author expects us to believe that the MC is smart and is expert explorer or some BS.

Generic novel with generic brain dead mc.

It's fucking trash! -zz-zjrj2ornejeop2bdoqmdjwpd odneine9fbeifneodn3ifbeiwndindinwiowneoejchhienduejdubeudbduwbcuebxidbiebejdbjdjejejejjejee9

Is that Rias from DxD? If yes which season?

Fire Mastery is combination of [ Fire Manipulation V ] and [ Purgatory Fire ]

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It is possible, because some haki users can detect intent or if they are being watched could find who watches them. That's why it is only possible to hide from a Haki user only if you are equally or more skilled in haki than the other user.