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I tried to read the mtl and I agree it’s nearly impossible to make it through a chapter because it’s horrible to read.

Please take out easy china sea and calling garp Karp

Much better than the mtl at least you fixed it up some cause the mtl almost had my brain melting.

4

Akeno will make an interesting addition with her personality

Screw the negative your doing a good job so keep it up

It’s quite good so far is it an original or an mtl ?

Yes

This is a very good book so far just keep it up!

It’s a good story but the names change every other chapter.