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PennyBoomer

PennyBoomer

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2019-12-11 JoinedUnited States
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    PennyBoomer2 years ago
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    It seems like a super good comic, but they want three passes per chapter. The chapters are too short for 3 passes to only unlock one. I would love to read more of it but it’s not worth that much.

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    PennyBoomer4 years ago
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    Honestly the orriginal art was good, but Its Newer epIsodes look so different wnd it almost feels like the story got dropped and then picked up by a different artist and author. Im not a fan. the first season/ set of story and art i would of given a 10/10, It’s not like the new art is horrible but it really throws me off and i just dont like it as much, the Colors are Better but thats it the new art is like a 5/10. also right around when the art changed one if the characters who had been prevelent disappeared without a reason or explanation. It also reffers back to past episodes and uses the orriginal Art every now and again so its Not consitent. both story and art have gone down in recent Chapters. I wish i could give this story 5 stars Because i loved this and used to buy the fast pass 10 episodes in advance because even though i had to pay a bunch for it i thought it was worth it, i wish i could still say the same. The story is still ok but Its a comic and the art has to help pull it together and it just doesnt do a great job of that anymore.

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Your score and tier and abilities mean everything. “ Lexi so what happens now that she has them.” “I’m not sure Brandon, but if people find out they will soon learn our secret. She can’t use them ever, and nobody outside of us can ever know.” “Lexie how will she ever learn. Call John he will come and teach her I’m sure.” “Of course he will, Lexi he’s her father. She has more of his traits than she has from the rest of us. He would of been the person who won and gotten you we both know that. Those drugs they made her what she is genetically, but these abilities and the power we both know she holds means everything and can let her form who she can be.” “No! She is my daughter... our daughter and we have no abilities. They will come for her if anyone finds out. The government they think she’s dead if they find out otherwise we will lose our daughter all four of us lose our child. Brandon nobody can ever know what she has or can do. We have to find a way to lock it away otherwise she will be killed.” “The other elementals tried to start a revolution and take over. That doesn’t mean our daughter will or that they will come for her.” “Brandon she is made up of 4 different peoples genes 3 of which are males from all different tiers, if they don’t come for her because she’s an elemental they will come take her because of that. It means that children can be born with more than one ability and can have a higher chance of scoring a 10. They will take her away to experiment on her or to make her into a weapon. We can’t let them do that.” “That won’t happen. John is the Presidents right had man and is in charge of the military and all the police he’s the top general, remember he’s the Chief Justice now. He helps makes the laws and is in charge of making sure they are carried out. My brother is also chief surgeon at the hospital and became a highly decorated general during the last war. None of us will let anything happen to our daughter.” “But is her life really something you are willing to bet on and risk?” “Of course not Lexi!” “Exactly so we have to do what’s best for her and until we know we can truly protect what is best is to keep her abilities hidden away from the world. That way she might have a chance to be a child and get to grow up and maybe one day have a family.”

PennyBoomer · Fantasy
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