whoops

theres now way 100 soul trait crystals dont overlap with mikes mind or body or soul traits that he can merged but you didnt mention any great presents? it christmas day and even if your parents have a major fight and your sad when your neibour ask's what you got your gunna at least mention your best present, so whats up? what did he loot thats awsome!

yep like it

now we are moving lets rock this after earth ark

i skipped so many words as i was reading since it should be like this dream is hacked, i win, the end, give me my aprentice card! whats the deal

was it just me but there was alot of words for hack slash devower!

can we just get more? the pace of the book cant work without more chapters! be great! give me more

recon mask was a clone? i mean temple might have such a tresure what better gift to his little brother then a clone of himself to look out for him?

yoink

the force is strong with this one!

this flash back is to late it needs to be just after the ice dragon girl learns his brother is dead, we knew mask was danny this whole time so the loot impact of collecting the ancient libary and the sentient forge has been forgotten by so many words because of this flashback! move this flashback and maintain the star char progression arc thanks author!

shut up and post more

why so many words (he came he smack the boss now tell me about the loot)

the whole book is like this the translater only gets the rank in order 1 outter 3 times so forget it

its on cooldown

is this book over?

complete waste of a chapter? where is titan blood blacksmiths vampire lords even dragon slave why am i reading this?

wasn't rae 5 the reavers first planet to be rule by them?

is it just me or are the chapters split ?

how did this novel turn out like this 4chapter a week is such a tease do i have to forget u for a year before i come back?