i would say it is just popularized term, if some type of utilizable energy appeared out of nowhere most people would call it mana or Qi unless someone gives it another name.

Glad you like it!

The way i see it, it´s a race for time for MC, he has average mana/body affinity and he needs to get everything he can to keep up with those in upper ranks, but i understand your concern, looking back i could handle the situation better.

Yes, the demons will Find pleasure in the negative emotions and they will tend to do bad stuff but Jordans nature is based on reason and because of that He has strong ressistance against it.

Most of the time the space rings are just plot-armor, despite saying how rare they are the mc gets it almost immediately or gives it to every member of his family and so on.

I wouldn't say he is being controlled, more like the demons from other worlds want something and he wants something from them, mutual benefit, in the other half its more clear but I will look into it.

Glad you like it, i wont be dropping the story but i wont focus much on it as well as i dont have that much time and the lack of feedback is depresing.

The idea is that there is so many demons that it will be pointless to control them all, also if the two powers didnt agree on the system of taking the demons and Angels they would drown the World in weak creatures that pass the barier and noone would win, but i understand if its confusing i will look over it and try to make it more understandable.

Glad you think so, hopefully, you will like the rest of the story as well.

Great chapter but please add blood type. Something like "Jake has blood type 0 so the chances of the blood being accepted are good" or something like that.

Thank you! almost lost hope of ever getting them but here we are.

I am glad that you think so, I tried to make the situation as real as possible and this is how i think it would go. Its quite extreme but back in middle ages the treatment of peseants wasnt any better.

I will try to do that. Thx.

Also, I would like to say that it´s strange that you criticize me on grammar when you made several grammar mistakes yourself.

I know grammar is my weak side and I work on it I am confident that the later chapters show dramatic improvement when compared to the earlier ones. I will be trying to edit the chapters in my free time. Also, I hope you didn’t base your review entirely on grammar, hopefully you can tell me what you didn’t like about the story.

The only way i see for those clan to work is by having a dictatoship with overhelmingly strong leader but by doing this all of the members would just try to overtake the leader, having such concept of a clan is very self-destructive in my opinion. Such thing is in "birth of a demonic Sword" but the mc there is in good relationship with the clan leader and gets enough resources to not Care about that.

There are such novels? Never heard of it

I will not tell you for now.

Partially, i like to read books with solid backround and reason begind things, sadly books like this a rare.

Thank you for your review! I am glad that you like my story.