I like it alot, purely based on terraria so far 👌

no problem, this fanfics been pretty fun to read so far, worth the wait I'd say 👌

why's the mc like that? if it's a kido system I'd assume they're atleast somewhat smart/mature

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

doesn't the ball go to losers side every time?

wait so wouldn't the mc be way older than the oc?

this is probably the best mha fic I have ever read, give it a read even if you're not into mha I swear you won't be dissatisfied.

continue pls

it wasn't so bad at first but after awhile it gets pretty confusing to read because the author keeps mixing genders, names, cultivation realms and power levels. I remember in one chapter I thought sora was stronger than Ling Han but apparently not and for a whole chapter I thought Ling Han was hanging out with his sister buy it was sora. honestly if there was better grammar I would've given this a higher rating.

Great fic, I really enjoy it and it's the best terraria fic I've read so far honestly the only thing stopping this from being 5 is the update stability which is still many times better than most.

thanks for the chapter

I was tolerating the horrible grammar for awhile until he got the fruit, the translation is pretty bad and I'm pretty sure it's an MTL (Machine Translated) novel honestly if you had an editor who has seen all of the movies/anime to well edit it would've been far better.

idea's great it just feels like I'm reading a wiki page sometimes and through a 5 year time skip I still wasn't sure what the mc was trying to do. Another thing is that I feel like there's alot of irrelevant info and it's also pretty easy to get lost in it (for me) as in I'll have no idea what's happening if I accidentally skip a line or 2. I think it's a good book but it's just not for me

one of the best Avatar fits I've read MC isn't the strongest right away but it'll be difficult to find any challenge in his age group besides top. the grammar is good (I haven't really noticed anything) and it's not too fast, it leaves me wanting more. definitely read if you're into The Avatarverse(?)

I like it, though I am a bit biased because of danmachi but I didn't really notice any grammar mistakes if you do, uh props I guess. I do kinda feel that the MC's wives are kinda just throwing themselves at him pretty quick although they have reason to do so (I guess) it just seems kinda rushed.

looks interesting, like it so far (even though it's just one chapter)

thanks for the chapter