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Graal_Otonami

Graal_Otonami

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A chill guy who reads trash and teaches kids how to count. Eats too much junk food and drinks pepsi over coke any day of the week. Cats are superior and deep down you know that.

2019-12-01 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami1yr
    Replied to Squa_81

    Honestly, it makes sense if you know anything about chemistry. I've never done it, but it's quite easy.

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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami1yr
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    My family used it to clear out a wasp nest by spraying it at night. it was quite the sight to see.

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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami1yr
    Replied to Dog_Lover3_2

    yes.

    Ch 399 Daring do
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to Meylicia_Toram

    nice

    "You kidding me?" He looked at Chris, "What are you? A boomer?"
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to Mad_Mace

    didn't care about it*

    In the back of his head he knew what he did way petty, but he didn't cared about it. In his eyes it was Chris' fault because he had poked his nose in a matter that didn't concern him. But As much as Arnold wanted to, he knew he couldn't just leave Chris lying in the middle of a road. Who knows what would happen to Chris if Arnold left him like that.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to William_Claw

    power can taint most brains? power can change most brains? the context is easy to read even if the word is incorrect.

    After continuously running for five minutes or so, he could see Chris' figure at the far end of the street. Once his objective was complete he recalled both Cerberus and the other lava hound and equipped the [CLOAK OF PHASING] and the [VINDICATOR]. He felt like he was like a god of death hiding in the dark. He then took out and wore a black mask that he had picked up earlier from the club. Arnold was trying to be as discreet and mysterious as possible because he didn't want to cause any trouble to 'the family'. Even if he was about to attack a jerk, the jerk was a member of a guild and that might cause some issues.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to KingOJD

    When someone blows, it's not usually stalking, crippling and torturing. it tends to be emotional, screaming, rip-and-tear style violence. This is beating a puppy because it defended your ex from you.

    "I'm here to teach you a lesson." The man behind the mask, whispered.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Commented

    Nah, I'mma stand with Chris on this one, Alice has been nothing but accomodating and hardcore crushes on the MC, but he treats her like dirt.

    "Like hell it isn't, how can he talk to Alice like that?" Chris snapped back at him.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Commented

    man's mood swings more often than a children's playground.

    "Never been better." A sinister smile appeared on Arnold's face.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Commented

    *tries to de-escalate a bad situation* "You're all terrible people and need to leave now and forever." This could have been settled with a "Control your friend or I'll have to ask you to leave" which would have had the same narrative affect without seeming overblown.

    "I'm sorry but you're no longer welcomed here. This club is funded by the Black Family and if you have any problems with them, means you have a problem with us. I'm afraid I'd have to ask you and your friends to leave immediately." Michelle intervened, "Further you've been banned from ever entering this club again."
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to spyfoxjm

    As far as I can tell, she didn't actively abuse him, and vaguely discouraged others from doing so, even if she never did anything about it.

    "Now if you'll excuse me I have some company tonight. Bye-bye and I hope I never get to see your shi*ty faces again."
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to Raph216

    He goes from moody, jaded and cynical to naive and genial in picoseconds.

    "Actually you guys are late. I arrived right on time." Arnold replied, hugging them both.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Commented

    it'd be nice to see these things happen

    Arnold knew he could create new blueprints if he had enough knowledge about them, thus he tried to make a new ability by combining the immobilising effect of his ice affinity and the damage inflicting capacity of his fire affinity into a single spell. It wasn't easy though, he had to perfectly balance the ratio of both of his affinities. Thus he combined the two of the affinities and formed the Frost-flame style.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Commented

    temper temper

    "This is so FRUSTRATING!" Arnold bellowed, "I really didn't want to use this but hell, you've pissed me off now!"
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Commented

    Doesn't he have a lightning/electric affinity?

    The electric shocks were sufficient to kill an ordinary human being, but wouldn't kill a rank B brawler like Bob.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to HA_BR

    Didn't he say earlier that it was the only place that would hire him and pay for his sister's care? And as soon as he got some power offered him great terms? And he looks back and thinks "Yeah, shouldn't have stayed."? Am I the only one seeing this?

    "I should've left the guild long ago..." Arnold shook his head, now wasn't the time to waste regretting the past.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to zouave

    I'm glad I'm not the only one who sees issues in the pacing. I know this was written a year ago, so I have to ask: Does it improve, or does the story still have abrupt shifts in emotion, pacing and tone?

    Ch 24 Misunderstanding? Yeah right!
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to FinalSlasher

    He's flexing on a secretary though.

    "Open the door or would you like ME to open it instead?" Johnny took a step towards her.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Replied to Ivxry_

    "I'll talk with some higher-ups" doesn't usually get some mid-rank stranger adopted by Don Black and given 100% legal protections AND daddy as a personal cheuffeure.

    "No I'm coming with you, we're a family now. Your problem is my problem." Johnny replied.
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  • Graal_Otonami
    Graal_Otonami2yr
    Commented

    Author needs to stop providing miracles and let the MC face some hardships. So far, he's not had a single hard loss.

    Just by saying that Arnold was now a part of the Black Family, Johnny gave Arnold the same special rights that the government had given to the 12 elite families. One of them being that no member of any of the 12 families can be arrested for any crimes until it's a crime against the nation and even in that case if someone had to be arrested, the President of the United States of America had to sign an arrest warrant only then the police and the military would get the authority to arrest them.
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