Graal_Otonami
A chill guy who reads trash and teaches kids how to count. Eats too much junk food and drinks pepsi over coke any day of the week. Cats are superior and deep down you know that.
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Honestly, it makes sense if you know anything about chemistry. I've never done it, but it's quite easy.
My family used it to clear out a wasp nest by spraying it at night. it was quite the sight to see.
nice
didn't care about it*
power can taint most brains? power can change most brains? the context is easy to read even if the word is incorrect.
When someone blows, it's not usually stalking, crippling and torturing. it tends to be emotional, screaming, rip-and-tear style violence. This is beating a puppy because it defended your ex from you.
Nah, I'mma stand with Chris on this one, Alice has been nothing but accomodating and hardcore crushes on the MC, but he treats her like dirt.
man's mood swings more often than a children's playground.
*tries to de-escalate a bad situation* "You're all terrible people and need to leave now and forever." This could have been settled with a "Control your friend or I'll have to ask you to leave" which would have had the same narrative affect without seeming overblown.
As far as I can tell, she didn't actively abuse him, and vaguely discouraged others from doing so, even if she never did anything about it.
He goes from moody, jaded and cynical to naive and genial in picoseconds.
it'd be nice to see these things happen
temper temper
Doesn't he have a lightning/electric affinity?
Didn't he say earlier that it was the only place that would hire him and pay for his sister's care? And as soon as he got some power offered him great terms? And he looks back and thinks "Yeah, shouldn't have stayed."? Am I the only one seeing this?
He's flexing on a secretary though.
"I'll talk with some higher-ups" doesn't usually get some mid-rank stranger adopted by Don Black and given 100% legal protections AND daddy as a personal cheuffeure.
Author needs to stop providing miracles and let the MC face some hardships. So far, he's not had a single hard loss.