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Love was unneeded so early and the worst part is that the female lead is OC. For me, the point of Fanfic is the interaction with other characters of the story, how he impacts in other's life, so if there is any kind of romance I expect it to be with a canon character, not this. I was hoping that she could only be his friend but it seems not, so I leave it here.
Is this novel based from a chinese novel named People start clocking in Tokyo? Because the start is incredibly similar. And if it is, I would like it that way. The idea of being billonaire and good at everything from the beginning make any situation pointless because there is no difficulty. For example, he just started school and in a few days he wants to quit; the other would be the relationships, the excuse of being handsome and rich to let any girl fall in love feels too easy and with too little development. I really was hoping something more school life with some supernatural behind the scenes(the supernatural part after I read he got powers), not a business development story. The same happen with Sis con with a group chat, the idea and the development was great, until he was in a relationship with 20 girls and a fiancee, and still declares to thousands of people that he loves other girl. And with that I quit it, I read it because of other worlds but then it transform in a business development story again. If I have to rate this novel, it would be 5 stars. After all, this is just my critic and my preferences. I am sorry if someone is bother by this.