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ShadowLurkez

ShadowLurkez

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2019-12-01 JoinedUnited States
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez2yr
    Replied to MynameJeff

    Because i don't like gender bender characters I like the idea of the multiverse and "copies" of him I just don't want them to be a "main" character in the story for too long

    Current Thought: She hopes you will give her a chance, she fears what could happen if she has to face the TVA alone.]
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    MARVEL: GAMER PATH
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez2yr
    Commented

    don't give her a chance let her die

    Current Thought: She hopes you will give her a chance, she fears what could happen if she has to face the TVA alone.]
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez2yr
    Posted

    This has been a great read you are creating a compelling world to keep the readers engaged in the story keep it up! Just don't stop writing!

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    The Shepherd
    Fantasy · Mayline
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez2yr
    Replied to MohammedKH

    That always ruins a story. Nothing good comes out of a party function.

    As for Emily, she was still trying to make a portal, she wasn't close yet, but her circles with the sling ring were already making yellow sparks, and she had leveled up thanks to the Ancient One, it was surprising really, when we arrived Emily was level 3, now she's level 9, and has mana on her status, something she didn't have before.
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    MARVEL: GAMER PATH
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez2yr
    Replied to Thenoicemaster

    That would be great I am doing more chapters but we have been moving and trying to get chapters out isn't to easy with no internet but I would be able to get a few chapters out soon

    Ch 2 Year 0, Day 6
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    Minecraft: The Abyss
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez2yr
    Commented
    Looks - Check Paragraph comment
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    Minecraft: The Abyss
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez2yr
    Commented

    Should I break up the paragraphs more?

    I immediately concluded that the word "Food-Restoration," on the back of the furnace actually means something. But then I thought that was crazy because how would it just suddenly start cooking a random steak that appeared out of nowhere? I couldn't let go of the possibility it was magic. I decided to start deciphering the line of runes on the wall and writing what it was in my book. It took me an hour just to decipher the first line of runes. The line of runes reads "Stationary, all-stable, growth spurt." I concluded that if the word replenish does something to the furnace, that maybe all the runes engraved on the wall are affecting the ground. I began to assume that every one of these runes affects the item it is written on. I wrote the word "ᚺᛟᛚᛞᛁᛜ" meaning holding, and I passed out for seemingly days. I decided to start my journey back to the withered tree, which seems to be the only tree on this island. I grabbed the steak and quickly ate it, though it was barely cooked. I climbed out of the hole and there was a skeleton standing above me. I looked at its face, and it was bare- no skin. It was holding a bow and arrow to my head, I got scared- it fired.
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    Minecraft: The Abyss
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez2yr
    Commented

    If you guys got any suggestions or ideas let us know. Or if you notice something wrong let us know so we can fix it we can take criticism as long as it's helpful criticism so we can improve.

    Ch 1 The Awakening Year 0, Day 1
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    Minecraft: The Abyss
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez2yr
    Commented

    Absolutely Loving if so far you're doing a great job although i don't like polygamy/harem novels as long as it isn't the main focus and he doesn't bow down to every whim of the girls i am fine with it. Keep up the great work!

    Ch 25 The Gap
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    Man among Gods
    Fantasy · Draugzel
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  • ShadowLurkez
    ShadowLurkez3yr
    Commented

    This seems great so far keep it up!

    Ch 2 1 million years
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    Stuck in a white room for 10.001.000.000 years
    Anime & Comics · daoistofeverything
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