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JonLorenz

JonLorenz

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Someone who loves comedy and romance

2019-11-27 JoinedPhilippines
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz3mth
    Commented

    Japan Anime might sue the author

    Ch 6 Chapter 1: The Extraterrestrial Parasite_1
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    Parasite from Outer Space
    Sci-fi · Lost Fish
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz6mth
    Commented

    Who is X? When did she even appear. It felt like she was just inserted.

    Ch 128 Father and Daughter
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    FATE: My Mother is King Arthur
    Anime & Comics · VALRRR
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz11mth
    Commented

    I like what I see. Is this what Obito felt when he saw Sasuke piercing through Karin just to kill Danzo in Naruto Shippuden.

    Ch 26 Chapter 26: Jus...tice?
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    Rise of the Eromancer
    Urban · Romeru
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    A new trope. The locals gets transmigrated soul memories. It is like protagonist is a demon king instead of cliche hero born

    His soul replaces the real Fei soul whose name was the same if it wasn't for some strange power in his soul that eradicates earth Fei soul, real Fei soul would have been dead.
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    Fighting For Eternity
    Eastern · Sabin_Subedi_Fei
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    Who is Genjiro

    Though when they inevitably meet again - who can guarantee that they will be the same people with whom Ainz once was able to make friends with? Who can guarantee that Ainz will find common ground with them again? Wouldn't the hundreds of thousands of his previous decisions no matter how infinitesimal they may be not lead to a completely different world in the end? What if one day he meets Genjiro in the future, and he turns out to be a teacher at the local magic academy? And this is not to mention the fact that Ainz felt extremely mixed emotions and very apprehensive about the idea that in this world he could one day, purely theoretically speaking, meet with himself…
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    Grand Foreigner
    Anime & Comics · OtakuWeibo
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    where is the photo!?

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    Reincarnated with an Analysis system.
    Fantasy · Kirito_K5
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Replied to JonLorenz

    Thinking about it. The undead transformation is like metamorphosis of caterpillar. The vampire might be the pupa. In Dragon Balls. Frieza had become more acquiline and stronger when he broke out of his pupa stage.

    Ch 28 017. Imperial Prince is Really Toiling Away -2 (Part Two)
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    Grandson of the Holy Emperor is a Necromancer
    Urban · Shadow-kun
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    Your writing is finally being rewarded. Months ago. You are complaining about the readers forcing you to gender bend the MC in NTR prince to satiate their preferences. Currently. Readers are now paying Patreon to read your works.

    Ch 78 p@tre0n
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    Revenge of the Ntr Prince
    Eastern · Inkyug
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Replied to Duke_Asmodeus

    Let the simp man watch and be face slapped to reality check. Kindness can't protect the kind

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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    It is more wrong to let wrong things happen to you. Forgiveness is for pathetic people who negotiate with reality

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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    is that 3 women spies cartoon

    Frank smiled when he saw his mother acting like her normal self. He quickly gulped down the Bloody Mary and said a brief prayer he heard on a cartoon dedicated to animated spies. For this, his extremely religious mother smacked him on the back of the head and scolded him once more.
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    Heir of Aurelian
    History · Zentmeister
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Posted

    One should watch Monster Girl Doctor. A connection that you can make is meaningless, what more if it is on and off relationship. Is Ben a cheap knockoff of Emiya Shirou. Others happiness? It was pathetic sight to see him cling to Dawn, Adrienne and other girls. The end result of break up is that he said that was love. A love that could be trampled when things go bad, is that even love? It is more realistic to sever such relationships that hold such cancer. Ben, when he ended the engagement to Adrienne, he should have said to her face that she was no different to Adam who didn't cherish what they had. Facing her demons? It is pathetic that she bowed to her demons rather than being strong for Ben's sake. How could she let her traumas affect her love Life? Can she even blush in shame? Disgusting bitch that should have died when Adam shot her. Adrienne and Ben Forever? Never judge. It is precisely because we see the bad that we can improve it. Adrienne never change from the raped 11 year old girl. The least she can do was dig an answer from Adam of why he did it. An 18 year old boy ain't a bonobo who would destroy trust just because of lust. Perhaps Adrienne was looking down on Ben due to his middle class status. Adrienne seems to choose women due to the reason that she can party more and not get pregnant. If one doesn't know any better. They will think she immortalized the fact that Adam will be the only one who impregnated her, if not, she might have secretly aborting Ben's babies. Birth pills has 99% effect, what about the concealed 1%, large plotholes there.

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    Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
    Celebrities · Fireces
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    His looks reminds me of Vandheer Lorde from Armed With Wings

    Ch 25 VAMPIRE PRINCESS
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    ARIFURETA: The Otherworldly Alchemist
    Anime & Comics · ArdoAleister
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    Is that Vandiver Lord from Armed With Wings Franchise

    She guessed that it was the hair of a monster that was proudly displayed on the top as a sign of strength. Her eyes traveled down as they were attracted to the silver chest plate adorned with blue lines coursing through it, the way it started pointed out from the top and smoothened out as it reached his bellybutton made her nod subconsciously as her eyes looked down to the rest of his body.
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    ARIFURETA: The Otherworldly Alchemist
    Anime & Comics · ArdoAleister
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    Oh please, have some self-respect, what Adrienne did is no different from the Chinese novels break-up due to rich dudes. Read Swordsman Dual Cultivate to understand that love is not a toy! What a beta, try to be like Tyson, he at least had self-respect, capable of being disgusted. You Ben are a failure of a human. Let Adrienne die in your heart and never glance at her again.

    Ch 245 Chapter 15: Lake Tahoe ll
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    Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
    Celebrities · Fireces
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    A traitor is always a Traitor

    Ch 241 Chapter 13: Beneath the Surface ll
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    Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
    Celebrities · Fireces
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    Laughable, Ben didn't like it when Adrienne wasn't ready for marriage but here he is now, doing it to his sisters. What a pathetic coward

    Ch 239 Chapter 12: November 22 ll
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    Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
    Celebrities · Fireces
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    Pfft! So Ben is copying Adrienne. Creating boundaries, pathetic and useless.

    Ch 238 Chapter 12: November 22 l
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    Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
    Celebrities · Fireces
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Replied to JonLorenz

    Chapter 140

    Ch 228 Chapter 7: Unafraid l
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    Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
    Celebrities · Fireces
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  • JonLorenz
    JonLorenz1yr
    Commented

    The epilogues shown was that Adrienne wasn't his wife

    Ch 228 Chapter 7: Unafraid l
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    Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
    Celebrities · Fireces
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