Banana_man

Also forgot to mention but shun still has his precognition so he could just predict whatever sukuna might try and instantly make him disappear

1. Sukuna’s attacks are not instant as seen in the mahoraga fight where it showed the slashes flying through the air. 2. Sukuna is really fast but shun can just be like 5km away from him in an instant and send him to some random like 7th dimensional place which would be fight over.

What do you bench?

Can you make me really stupid?

This story is very well written with a depth to all the original characters that keeps them relevant to the story. But I really can’t keep reading after around chapter 30 because the main character just seems so annoying. He constantly boasts to people of his heritage without even telling them who he is. He tries to act diplomatic and talk to people but it always ends up with them almost attacking him and then he shows his dragon so he has no real charisma just force. He makes mediocre plans that are unnecessary complex. He trains a little bit which we as the reader are basically never shown as to what his abilities actually are or how strong he is. He’s overly confident and complaining believing that he will have a massive dragon in just a month that will make him invincible or that he will even be strong enough to fight and beat his dragon as a human. The way he talks to certain characters makes them immediately hostile until he can kill them so he just taunts people for no reason and makes enemies he doesn’t need to make. Just a couple things in my rant that I hope people might consider before they read this, the story is pretty decent overall though.

I’ve always wanted to read a fic about the MC as dragon in this world, I think that would be a cool idea.

Don’t often see avatar fics so this is cool, and I do love benimaru.

I’ve on a Harry Potter streak recently and this is the most unique idea for one I’ve seen.

This is a pretty cool idea, would the Danmachi skills be able to be upgrade using great sage just like rimuru’s skills?

I feel like the whole introduction of Tartarus was too early and should probably be saved for the Gaia Arc to make the scaling a bit easier to follow, cause him even damaging Tartarus by himself is a feat that is too early for someone who is basically a demigod still.