cheerfulEeyore

Oh this is gonna be an entertaining story to read! Hope author doesn't give up!

Content of this chapter is a repeat!

Read up to Chapter 20 and about to give up. As another review has mentioned, the ML is well... chauvinistic. He (and his dad and kinda also his mom) has been gas lighting the FL as if she's the only one who has made a mistake. He and his dad pretty much think that infidelity is acceptable because ML is a man, but ML loses his mind thinking FL betrayed him with his friend. He has also not shown any changes from the main point of conflict with FL to two years after. FL so far has been interchangeably strong then weak/naive. Grammar is ok; you can still follow what's going on. I wonder if there will be improvement in the story and characters but I don't know if I can read until the end to find out.

If you'd read enough web novels, most of the plot would most likely be predictable (at least for me in the published 84 chapters so far). There is a primary misunderstanding between the leads but I feel like given their characters, it doesn't make it unreasonable that they haven't resolved it yet with a conversation/confession. Grammar is good; easy to read. Closer editing could help the story have less confusion (example - FL asks ML about a possible note he sent her but FL then later says there was no note). Wishing author the best!

my heart!

Started reading as a 24H free reading then decided to give a couple more chapters a chance. The beginning is pretty good - I thought it would go the usual route of rebirth but it didn't. FL actually broke free from the forced relationship early on. ML is decent as well. There's enough mysteries to make you want to read more. However, I'm not sure if it's about the pacing or the redundancy of having Ryan and Delyth chapters of "regretting", "brain washing", then "being more annoying", or a combination of both that it's making me feel the story is dragging. I personally would prefer for some mysteries to be solved or partially solved soon.

thanks for the heads up!

Had this as 24-hr free reading. I didn't read the entire novel carefully but it was enough to know the key points. I recommend this story for any readers looking for more fast paced story and agreeable if not all mysteries are solved. I think the story could have been explored more but for a free read, it's worth investing time for 210 chapters.