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As far as I know, gravity is a manifestation of curved space. And I see no reason to train the body. Increase gravity on yourself and play with Rias. Children's games are very active, children can run around all day. And with altered gravity it will be just a hell of a workout.
English is not a native language. I really don’t understand what the problem is. His ability (seeing the operational Laws of all things), judging by the description, requires looking at the mutant and that’s it. Looking at the mutant, he must understand everything about him. Including how the brain works. Therefore, it is not clear why it is necessary to open someone’s head or rob someone.
English is not my native language. I will write what shortcomings I noticed in this fanfic. The first shortcoming is the multiple strengthening in battle. If anyone does not know, this nonsense was invented by the Chinese. No one becomes stronger in battle. All that people get from battle is experience and more effective use of their skills. The second shortcoming is the unrealistic description of the main character's thoughts. In dangerous situations, people hardly think, they just do. The solution literally appears in our heads by itself, without a path of how the solution came to us. The third shortcoming is the illogicality of the system. Blood is much more difficult to control than ice. Therefore, he should have mastered ice much earlier than the battle with the bear. Mages who control tons of water can take control of blood only during the full moon. But the main character can control blood, but cannot turn water into ice and control large amounts of water. Plus, the main character is strangely weakened. Katara was so weak at the beginning because she did not have a teacher. As soon as he appeared, her development went rapidly. The main character actually has a teacher. The system itself gives him the right moves, but he is slightly stronger than Katara (at the beginning of the series).
I suggest trying Japanese names. Because Chinese names are too similar to each other. After chapter 100, the names begin to get confused and you don’t immediately understand who is speaking.
I think that such unreliable people can be resurrected. But after the resurrection, put a seal on them that will explode their skull if they betray Enel. Or another non-lethal seal of loyalty that inflicts paralysis or silence, if that. Translated via Google.
According to canon, Astoria will live quite a long time. Minimum 20 years of age. So I have a question. Why sacrifice magic now? And also why didn’t he start absorbing Horcruxes? I don't think a horcrux has any more magic than a dragon. And if you need a lot of his magic, why can’t he accumulate it in some kind of storage device? And to be honest, it was funny for me to read his words about strength, after he did not protect his precious dog. Translated via Google translator.
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how could he miss a sloth with seismic vision?
English is not my native language. In response to the author. You can't make a non-MC hero with this quirk. With an order, you can even permanently copy, take, or create other quirks. His money problems are also ridiculous. His order can grant the ability to copy. And use it to copy money. The author makes the hero smart, but ignoring such obvious capabilities of the delvet hero is very stupid. And the paradox is that the hero is smart, but stupid.
Then what meaning becomes stronger? If you become the strongest, then the level of the world will increase and you will again become a weakling compared to the rest.