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AMilan

AMilan

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2019-11-26 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • AMilan
    AMilan1yr
    Replied to Punity_

    And I assume that they had some knowledge of the language before the mission to ensure communication with non combatants. Standard practice

    This remark caused Lach to sneer in disgust as he pistol whipped Chandra across the back of the head and tossed him over his shoulder. After doing so, he pointed his pistol towards the naked women and gave a command to his unit.
    altalt
    Tyranny of Steel
    History · Zentmeister
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  • AMilan
    AMilan1yr
    Replied to

    The author does say that it is said in the emperor's native tongue

    This remark caused Lach to sneer in disgust as he pistol whipped Chandra across the back of the head and tossed him over his shoulder. After doing so, he pointed his pistol towards the naked women and gave a command to his unit.
    altalt
    Tyranny of Steel
    History · Zentmeister
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  • AMilan
    AMilan2yr
    Posted

    Shameless self-review here to get me on the rankings, but while I'm here I might as well share some of my thoughts. I have been wanting to write this story for a while, so the character and story ideas are abundant, however, I realise that I am new to this and am therefore looking to improve for both mine and your sake. I am looking for criticisms and ideas. The story follows our MC in his ever bigger descent into the underworld - the birth of a true crime syndicate. Since he views the system, and by extension his quest to build a syndicate as a god given divine mission, he becomes quite fanatical towards the system as the plot develops. This is not a get strong quick OP MC kinda story. Expect slow but solid growth along with the growth of the system until he reaches the pinnacle and who knows when he gets to the pinnacle he might find out that he is just a little frog at the bottom of a very, very steep well. I look forward to interacting with you all, and building a nice community so that this novel can be better both for me and you all.

    altalt
    Chronicles of The Styx Syndicate
    Fantasy · AMilan
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  • AMilan
    AMilan3yr
    Commented

    If she potted two reds that means that there's 13 reds left . 13x8 =104 +2+3+4+5+6+7=131 not 141.

    She had only acquired two points. And Xiao Luo? A whopping 141 points, ending the game by clearing the table. She was proud of how she played. Even when she went against masters, she had never lost so miserably. How could this little nobody triumph over her?
    altalt
    The Genius System Without Equal
    Urban · Straw is crazy too
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  • AMilan
    AMilan3yr
    Commented

    September 4th 2130 is a Monday though ?

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    altalt
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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