Reality_101
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Reality_1012yrCommentedOh my Jesus save me! I can’t
Hyunsuk added, "If you pour ink on it right now… you will get a free tattoo."- Reality_1012yrCommented
😂🤣🤣 He 👏🏽 got 👏🏽 that 👏🏽 sass!
"Then you should cook dinner on Christmas too. I will enjoy the holiday on my bed relaxing." He shouted so that he could hear. - Reality_1012yrCommented
hm…. I recommend checking your grammar a bit. It kind if threw me off a little. Can’t wait to see you improve as an author! 💜
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The fact that my father tells me the same thing about me wanting ti pursue my of a music career is painful. That feeling burns your heart and soul.
"Well, my father didn't think that way. He yelled saying that no one could make a good living doing what they loved. He said I was being childish and naive." - Reality_1012yrCommented
That was a real quick 360 degree turn…
Just as Mr. Reverale went to exchange a handshake with him, Damien took hold of his hand to place it on the table. In one swift movement as if he were chopping onions, he chopped the four fingers of the man off his hand making him yelp and cry in pain. - Reality_1012yrReplied to THERADiANT
I don’t think you should be quick to assume. Maybe the author wants there to be a lesson that the MC learna from this, there is never a goid reason or excuse to speak ill of another person. I understand that you’re probably getting irritated with this, but you shouldn’t lash out like this.
When Ye Mo saw Ning Qingxue was starting to plead for herself, he hurriedly held his hands up and said: “Stop, stop, stop…” After, he took out a roll of notes and gave Ning Qingxue 2000 dollars as he said, “This is the only time. Next time, don’t ask me for money because my money is hard earned.”