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Daoist_Slade643dCommentedCh 331 Tenacious As a Demon- Daoist_Slade6410dCommented"This Secret Technique was initially very difficult to master; later while meditating in the garden, an apple fell upon my head, and I suddenly came to an understanding..."
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Something about this sentence is familiar
It seemed like some flying objects were heading towards the Twin Towers Cliff. - Daoist_Slade6417dCommented"She fell asleep while he was hitting on her," Rayne said and shook her head
- Daoist_Slade6421dCommented"You're not a man??"
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Doesn't he have lapis eyes
Five minutes later, a completely naked Erix stood beside the real Erix, both looking strikingly the same with a shredded and lean muscled physical body and lively red eyes with black patterns in pupils. - Daoist_Slade6424dCommentedAll twelve Baiandrones were shattered, along with their weapons and other things, into hundreds of tiny perfect square parts.
- Daoist_Slade6426dCommented"I have a man, and he needs to fuck you. You can come willingly, or I can forcefully take you," Lilith spun her umbrella while casually speaking. "Choose."
- Daoist_Slade641mthReplied to wo_x
Disney seems to make everything they buy worse than when they bought it.
Erix sidestepped to the left and dodged the Ant's head rush, and quickly landed a powerful chop with all of his strength on the Ant's neck before it could turn its head to bite him. - Daoist_Slade641mthCommented
*missle bombardments
"During this period, the Giant Beast disappeared after ignoring various Federation missile bombings..."detailMythical Era: I Evolved Into A Stellar-Level BeastEastern ¡ Encounter Atop The Celestial Mountain - Daoist_Slade641mthCommented
Did you'll forget that the beginning of the novel starts with him not wanting to live anymore?
Yet in the next moment, something shocked Elena. Zane opened his eyes, revealing that he had been awake the whole time. He did not appear to be angry with her in the slightest, instead he almost appeared like he welcomed the idea of her killing him, a sentiment which he unbelievably expressed aloud in a whisper so low, Elena thought perhaps she was hearing things. - Daoist_Slade641mthCommented
You are being redundant. Just say, "A feminine voice scoffed in reply/as she replied:" Then add what you want her to say in the next paragraph. I've noticed that you kept describing what you want them to say and then having them say it.
The feminine voice scoffed as she commanded the guy she was with to keep his head on a swivel. After all, Zane was clearly armed, and neither of them knew when they would come under attack. - Daoist_Slade641mthCommentedCh 259 Truth (2)
- Daoist_Slade641mthCommentedThe jade slip contained a Qi skill that allowed on to roll like a panda and crush enemies under themselves. The only problem was that the skill had specific requirements on the body of the user.
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*no longer vibrant
This paragraph has been deleted. - Daoist_Slade641mthCommentedCh 50 Chapter 50: The First Trial. (Part 2)
- Daoist_Slade641mthCommentedChapter 1: The World's Greatest Spy.
- Daoist_Slade641mthReplied to Berry_Smoothie
To be fair to the author, until I see proof that he's read such stories, he probably doesn't even know there's a whole nother word hor such.
"Plane crash... exactly the same, I... really reincarnated!"