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Yatz_132mthCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: I Want to Learn Martial ArtsdetailUnstoppable Martial Arts: Starting from Attribute Points AllocationEastern · Sad wind turns the sunset- Yatz_131yrCommentedCh 1 Ruins Exploration Gone Wrong!
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- Yatz_132yrCommentedCh 1 The Rock Pillar At The Bottom Of The Sea
- Yatz_132yrCommentedCh 1 Lin Mu
- Yatz_132yrCommentedCh 1 A Boring Life
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- Yatz_132yrReplied to yanglin
No, I'm not saying that the grandfather needs to kill his other grand child. But this is the third time the girl is getting beaten up. And after reading the next chapter I see that the grandfather was neutral but he himself stipulated that the girl should not be hurt physically and this is the third time she gets beaten up physically. Where was the grandfather the first two times she was beaten up? And you cannot say that he didn't know cause with the amount of resources he has it is easy for him to keep an eye on her.
Ch 33 Chapter 33 - Yatz_132yrCommentedCh 1 Ruins Exploration Gone Wrong!
- Yatz_132yrCommentedCh 91 Boundless Hatred [(Part-2)/2]
- Yatz_132yrCommentedCh 100 Chapter 100: Sacrificing a few
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Instead of repeating the MC's name 'alex' in every sentence just use 'he' and repeat the name after a paragraph or two. Using the name of the character in every sentence makes it annoying to read. Specially when you have only one active character in the scene. Also you really need a good editor.
Ch 31 Red Skies. - Yatz_132yrCommentedCh 1 A New Beginning
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- Yatz_132yrReplied to finee_k
I'm not annoyed because it's unrealistic, I'm more annoyed because there were a 100 different options that the author could choose but he choose the silliest option. I mean the MC is essentially magneto. Would magneto do what the MC did?
The results Nico imagined would hopefully create small gaps replacing his joints that would function with the same properties as magnetic frictionless gears. Additionally, the magnetic field would hold onto the iron in his blood, helping to keep the blood from leaving his body after being cut.