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Bru, she is his sister
frankly this chapter does not take into account the character of character of the webtoon, with yuri blushing at the life of the mc is embarrassing. and the guy who asks for a date has a girl who is certainly attractive, but whom he has only known for a maximum of 10 minutes, will say that he had never seen a beautiful woman, and just with that we have the impression that this fanfic will only be a race for women as there are tons on this site. but this is part of the understanding of OC characters or not, so the author can improve.
moreover the author misunderstood the power of gojo. limitless does not create layers but only one with infinite distance between it and the rest, so as long as touma touches the varriere it will disappear. I imagine the author did this to make the power of gojo impossible to counter. which is unnecessary in my opinion.
this fanfic bothers me a lot, the author first presents the mc as someone passionate and who does not give up despite the illness and then he throws us a system frankly known I do not like it will have better pass if you had given him a talent level or he already had it and only his body was holding him back. but the addition of the system is difficult because instead of making efforts to progress it will only rob others which takes away the main part of the stories on the sport which is the progression and the gain of skills by the effort. maybe I'm wrong . but its remains in the same vein as other fanfics with system, where the mc will only depend on the system (even if it is not a system but a flight ability)