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Not_ayin3mthCommentedCh 186 Embodiment of Death- Not_ayin3mthCommented
look a black hole
"In my dictionary, the term 'give up' never existed." Arkhan said lightly while smiling without worry. "Just relax and enjoy the show. Soon, I'll show you a true myth." - Not_ayin4mthReplied to Not_ayin
*Cane
[Quest Reward: Ninth Divine Key - Star of Eden] - Not_ayin4mthCommented
Get the staff version.
[Quest Reward: Ninth Divine Key - Star of Eden] - Not_ayin5mthPosted
I like the story so far.. especially the MC's personality since to me he sounds like a chill dude, You're pacing is good to me since I understood all that happened, but one thing I suggest is to put the meaning of French words that are relevant to the plot in the bottom since most of us are too lazy to google it up, characters are also fleshed out and aren't just made in China copy paste cut out personalities. you're grammar is also good even though you said it's your third language. I also noticed that the fanfic has a romance tag, I recommend going monogamy and having just a single partner since harems aren't usually all that romantic. I also suggest Furina as a love interests, I would like to see more fanfics with her as one. overall I like it and give it a 5 star, please don't drop. [img=More pls]
- Not_ayin5mthCommentedCh 6 Case Closed
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it's already better than people with it as a first and second.
Finally, English is my third language, so I apologize if my grammar so far has been mediocre at best. - Not_ayin5mthCommented
Red is Indeed a good color
"What a coincidence, red is my favorite color." - Not_ayin6mthCommented
isn't that good for you? Don't mind me with midterms and a research paper to defend. Oh and a dance presentation right after the research paper defence.
So yeah. Now that the exams is gone, I can go back to uploading again. - Not_ayin7mthCommented
you'll love basic calculus
A/N: I hate Pre-Calculus. - Not_ayin8mthReplied to MISLEAD
That is a very good suggestion I suggest we take this up with the top brass, and see their reactions.
[4]: Gerhman573 is a beta reader and this is here for vanity sake. - Not_ayin10mthCommented
With the other hand holding snacks.
Luckily I'm home alone right now, it's still 7 am and I'll have to pick up my brothers at 11:30 am. Which means no one to disturb me from playing a 'one hand' game. - Not_ayin1yrCommented
Author spent too much brain cells studying full metal alchemist alchemy, that some of his brain cells died.
The reason Ankhseram couldn't at this current act at this time didn't know the process of bypassing him. - Not_ayin1yrCommented
bro, I think you killed grammar
Ankhseram's role as life and death is to preserve it and punish those that contort or disrupt that cycle but unfortunately, the matter it sees now is out of his realm or jurisdiction to judge the boy in bed asleep for playing as God with life or death. - Not_ayin1yrReplied to HarryBlack
the monologue of a discord user.
I'm no better but at least I have some class! - Not_ayin1yrReplied to ratuzin
I'm getting turned on by you explaining that~ hmmmmm~
I really do wonder why there is porn of characters with diapers. - Not_ayin1yrPosted
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neat
"Oh, that. That's your semen."