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Morgrim_DarkHeart9mthPostedwhat is with all of the repeating chapters? I've heard of authors padding their stories before but this is just ridiculous. you have eyes I'm pretty sure you can see these are being repeated but instead refused to fix them or remove them. until they start being removed I'm going to keep my review at one star and I urge others to do the same. why be rewarded for being lazy
- Morgrim_DarkHeart9mthReplied to Elyon
any tips for writing with any kind or type of filler in even chapters? also will his birth parents ever come looking for him? I mean the fact that he is a half elf with red hair and is of the correct name and comes from a place that just so happens to be down the river from the place his birthday is stuck him in the river of...?
Ch 391 Running Out Of Options [Part 1] - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrPosted
- Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
do we really need to hide identity? like do we really need to hide it as she is already a necromancer which should not be all that great to other people and some of her companions are undead. not to mention she's on the path of probably becoming the next demon Lord so is hiding identity even necessary I really don't think so
Ch 46 The Former Slaves - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
so is this going to be the start of when she realizes that humans are not as nice as she wants them to be even the innocent ones?
"I won't listen to your seductive words, handsome dragon! I will go valiantly save these people and make connections with them!" I said as I bravely leaped off of Kuro after we reached the area where shit was going down. - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
first burden of many more to come that will in some way or reason become a weakness for reasons not known to us mere mortals
I feel responsible for the past Maria, so I have to do this for her. - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
because he's a Duke I very much doubt they could have actually targeted or threatened his family considering his father should at least be a Duke or mother
"Y-Yes! I don't know why you don't remember your past, but… You were known as the Dark Witch. Wherever you went, you spread misfortune everywhere… Although most of it ended being plots made by aristocrats and enemies of your family… I-I myself ended colluding with them, and with their help, we apprehended you and used your death as a way to take ahold of the masses… I-I had no other option! If I didn't cooperate, they would have targeted my family and me!" - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
awwww and here I was expecting a slaughter
The Adventurers suddenly realized that they were being too reckless and rushed upstairs, running back to their town. Well, I guess they weren't stupid. We reached the surface and dived deep into the Dark Forest without any problems. I guess life doesn't always have to end in conflicts! - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
that sounds like a great idea after all who doesn't like a nice power leveling arc?
Maybe I should go to the human city next and slaughter them all to get even more EXP? - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
well there goes your hope to assimilate back into human society
You gain the hatred of others, and your very existence seems to be a threat to any human. - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
yay she can survive one novice spell, maybe
[Magic Damage Resistance: Lv1] - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
by that sort of weakness rank would she be killed or heavily hurt by sunlight?
[Rank : [G-] - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
I'm not even sure how to pronounce the middle name
[Name : [Maria Fuentes Belles] - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
I wonder if she'll have to defend her body? I mean she is a ghost so while bound to her body it being destroyed would mean she would die
The people started to celebrate the death of a woman whose head was sliced off. I didn't know what else to feel other than utter spite for all of them. Time passed, and two guys carried my corpse and head elsewhere. After several hours of traveling through a medieval ages-like town, we reached the area's outskirts, where a large gate opened. My corpse was stuffed into a coffin alongside my head, and then the coffin was… put inside a carriage. I was then carried somewhere else… - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
so you went the slime and ice dragon route here, I guess we can call this the slimy ice dragon Ghost route now
[Request Confirmed, a Body according to the user's desires will be generated…] - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
there are worse ways to die
The moment this happened, the bookshelves near me began to tremble, and a mountain of Mangas, Light Novels, and even Eroge fell over me and crushed my body. I really told my mother that I wanted to have that Japanese trip. She was so tired throughout the whole flight, and now here we go, I die… Feeble? Well, yes, I am a feeble little woman. I never had the genes of my sister… she's a giant gorilla… - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrReplied to jeebjanson
As a monster that eats the soul stones, that's also likely eating the souls of some of the soldiers
[A soldier of the Helvetian kingdom, turned to stone. It stands guard, waiting for its chance to exact revenge on those who would harm its kingdom.] - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrReplied to Ravage87
I would agree if it wasn't for the fact that there could be skills that specifically enhance arrows and bolts because they're likely is like in many RPGs
Anya nodded and squinted, ready for battle. She held her crossbow up, aiming to fire as soon as the soldiers came within aggro range of the skeleton vanguard. - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrCommented
I wonder if the game disc actually does something for him if he regains it. I mean since his powers come from the game I would think that the game disc itself would Grant him some sort of power boost. or maybe a passive XP generator. so that he passively generates experience over time like 10 XP per hour or per day which isn't much but considering he is an undead and as such effectively immortal time is something he has an abundance of
Ch 187 Second and Fourth Deathguard - Morgrim_DarkHeart1yrReplied to Red_baronCh 32 the current novel and the future