Your progression and story telling is way to rushed and crude.the way you started the story was nice but your follow through doesn't feel worth it at all....

hey dude do you have problems with addressing gender or wot???You call boy she/her n girl he/him... like seriously wtf??

Beautiful story.. .Addictive and completely worth reading

Completely worth reading. .. beautiful story

enjoy my foot you lazy bum

nice day my foot .....more chapters fast

Nah.. I'll pass the new cover looks lame

you hardly release single chapter a day and still asking shamelessly for votes....

fix your grammar dude .... seriously man u mix the genders half of your writing doesn't make any sense..

Man u r calling a guy she and a girl he...hard to understand whom u r refering to with ur way of adding multiple names in a conversation

nice day my foot😡😡😡😡😡mass release please....

come on man be punctual with chapters.... it's getting boring waiting for just a chapte... can't u do a mass release.Go premium if u have to but release more chapters regularly damn it...

Absolutely enjoyed your writing..And keep up the good work..................................................................................👍👍♥️♥️

unlocking chapters with fp is okay but why the **** do i have to purchase privilege every time just to read more chapters....**** this is so frustrating

Really man a scardy nun to a sis-con's nightmare u sure know how to develop a character

The storyline seems to be alright and the noble is readable but the grammar is so pathetic that you can't make the heads and tail out of it.....So plz improve your grammar so it's easy to understand and appreciate your work...

RIP ENGLISH BROTHER