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McNiels1yrCommented"Go. It's disgusting to see your face."- McNiels1yrCommented
A mother who terribly missed her son for 3 years would not leave him alone the first day they’re reunited. Just had to say it.
Tian Long had been extremely tired yesterday, so he slept in the room that was assigned to him, and after making sure he slept, she stayed with him for a few hours, looking at his face before she finally left him. - McNiels1yrCommented
Should just stop mentioning the body and let MC cry. Once was enough.
He bit his lips and mused, 'Is this also because of the child's developing body?' - McNiels1yrCommented
This is a mistake in my opinion
Feeling rather embarrassed, he thought, 'Is the child's young body influencing my emotions to a degree?' - McNiels2yrCommented
This one ☝️
4)Jujutsu kaisen with Aizen as the mc - McNiels2yrReplied to
I don’t really see Madara do that as he is the careful type. He was already told he would get another life in a new world—meaning he currently ignorant, maybe even powerless and has to train over.
Madara ignored the people that were making fun of him. He looked around for anything that would help him grasp the situation or to at least gain some type of information before progressing. "I need to figure out where I am. What did that bastard do?" He said as he was walking down a sidewalk. - McNiels2yrCommented(A/N: A lot like this but with different color ice.)
- McNiels2yrReplied to NIRVANAFLAME1
For fun and to mess with canon however I want.
"Hell yeah, maybe I can experience the *Dragon King Festival*. The war that started it all. The war where the dragons' opinions divided them into two groups. Those that want to coexist with humans vs. the dragons that want to rule the world. I want to see it!!" Marc danced in joy in his head but didn't show anything other than a toothy smile to the village chief. - McNiels2yrReplied to HHKingCh 2 Chapter 2 - Prologue (Edited)
- McNiels2yrCommentedCh 83 Chapter 83 - Resurfaced nightmares
- McNiels2yrReplied to Just_Miyuki
That manga is pretty funny 😆
Chapter 82 - The Ride-On King is back - McNiels2yrReplied to skiptail
It will 👍🏻
(A/N: Think Esdea(th) is the type to share a man? The answer is simply NO!!) - McNiels2yrReplied to Spriz731
Sorry, it’s all in the fingers ⌨️
This paragraph has been deleted. - McNiels2yrCommented(A/N: Reference is a Beotodus from Monster Hunter World: Iceborn.)
- McNiels2yrReplied to UndeadProgenitor
I have to be straight with you, it’s not at all helpfull. I would like if you could point out the mistakes properly and give a link to a source if its about the geographical part of the story. Then as the author of this story I’m sad to hear you don’t like it, but I think it get’s better if you continue on. BTW I do plenty of research, its just that I really don’t have time to rewatch/reread Fairy Tail again. But all in all, thank you for your input and I will make sure to improve.
- McNiels2yrReplied to UndeadProgenitor
What’s my mistake? If you are talking about Fiore not existing yet, then please give the source where you have that from.
"Ehm, it's because this village is located northwest of *Fiore*. Behind a mountain range and *Waas Forest*. We don't get much news of what's happening around us, simply because of our secluded location. Only *Cait Shelter* comes to our village two times a year to trade, and gives us some general news." The village chief explained his reasons for being unsure and showed the village's general location on a map made of cow skin. - McNiels2yrReplied to BeautifulBastardCh 79 Chapter 79 - A fight before the hunt
- McNiels2yrReplied to Crown_Ball22
I’m not spoiling too much, but Irene’s fate will change.
(A/N: Location here!) - McNiels2yrReplied to Vee_555Ch 77 Chapter 77 - Running into Esdea again