MagnusArchae
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MagnusArchae11mthCommentedaaaaayyyy, i always felt that heph matched faaaar better with athena myself as well, so i am absolutely loving this divine dynamic. :P
"Athena..." he whispered with bitter-sweet pain in his voice. She looked away, but there was just the slightest hint of a blush on her cheeks. She wasn't the only Olympian that had stepped in, on this fight.- MagnusArchae11mthCommented
oooh, linkin park, nice
"I know I may end up failing, too. But all I want to do ...Is be more like me and be less like you." - MagnusArchae2yrCommentedCh 1257 1257. Fire And Earth Combined
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aw how cute
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-Mike "didn't" let the chance slip away- or hadn't, both work
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second sentence is kinda awkward, not completely certain what its trying to say
"Oh, and the guardians will come too. I said we could use it as a way to train together. It seemed that they don't actually get to train in the ways they want of to get outside their villages. As long as their champions come here I think it will be fine. I really hope they will take some time to join competitions too." Since Su found that she had baited the guardians and even champions to a degree, she wanted them to come and see the truth in her words. Even more, she wanted to prove that she was powerful within her own right. - MagnusArchae2yrReplied to Lady_Sangeriu
yeah, i was getting confused myself, since the kids talking are saying 13yr old was old, then how young are they, but they talk like this?
"I-I hope that slut you keep talking about likes it." - MagnusArchae2yrCommented
13, or 30?
"Old?! I'm only thirteen, you little brats!" he bolted out exasperatedly. - MagnusArchae2yrCommentedBut Sol was sure that he had nothing to worry about.
- MagnusArchae2yrCommented"Think, Edward, think! Right now, you could have a beautiful reunion with your little sister. If you wait, you have to explain why you waited. And once you realize that you will wait even longer. I'm telling you, just go to her now." Seth said and left.
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flag raised, Seth will now become the Melee Bard XD
Good thing he had declared himself a Bard for the evaluation and all of these were just insurance. He would love to just stay in the back and play music, while everyone else would take care of the fighting. - MagnusArchae2yrCommented
entropy, i think you meant, entirety
"There can't be any comparison to my flames and his." Ignus seemed a little thrown off his comparison but knew better than to refute it outright. The keeper had known Ignus for the entropy of his life and even those before Ignus. - MagnusArchae2yrCommentedCh 1176 1176. Specific Skill
- MagnusArchae2yrCommentedCh 399 399. Soul Music
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got a double negative here, im thinking you meant "less than pleased" or "rather displeased". otherwise it it reads like she is happy
The princess was less than displeased, while the Demon watched the situation he had created with a gleeful smile. - MagnusArchae2yrCommented
im assuming you meant expanding, rather than expending
"I didn't realize how far they would set up the fields. Assuming we would keep expending though…" Walker could imagine just how large the city would be in the next few years. They would be in a rush for space up until the end of the next year. Right now though, there was space to use as they saw fit. "What else do you have planned for the day? Anything big?" - MagnusArchae2yrCommented
lord(s)
In the evening, Seth and the lord of Minas Mar wore their best attire and joined the Welcome Banquet in a venue close to the accommodations. They were the representatives of Minas Mar, and they knew the Princess. - MagnusArchae2yrCommented
yeaaaah, this was the only one that was really unexpected to me lol. My best guess is perhaps the Origin caused the Pond to develop some sort of water spirit?
The surface of the pond rippled before the glow dimmed slowly until completely disappearing, the pond changing back to normal water. - MagnusArchae2yrCommented
"it is not worth holding on to for all of time" works, but personally, i feel it sound a tad awkward, "for a long time" flows a little better, but that might just be me lol
"It was necessary for the growth of my friend. They will be able to live the way they need. I also would have used it for the crystals as well, I need them for food. We also will make more gold. It is not worth holding on to for all of time." While Onyx made good points, Su still felt that he had been a little too much. But Alice was singing softly to make the light elemental mana in the room even more pure, so she didn't press the issue.