MedDS
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they have* guns!
good? questionable killing the demon king ? true
make sure to destroy the soul you do not want some pesky immortal roaming around
it feels forced and exposition_y
they had religion before the catalisme
i don t know why but this whole part from the begining feels off not in the story sense but the way it is phrased and written
read the birth of the demonic sword it is a great cultivation story and has 3 daily updates exept 1day/2months
stop using "!" for every phrase it is anoying
if he wants to he can reach godhood this instant by destroying all bariers using his soul power so he is already limiting his progress
I think in our world people knew about prisms before we could make them in the 15 hundreds because of naturally existing crystals
science termonoligy is like that because most things are named before we fully understand them. so by saying mutation he might mean the mist that is inside "mutants"
okay this is not dialog it is exposition
I would be so angsty like somebody a day younger than me can bend the law nature but you can't do sh*t