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MedDS

MedDS

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pessemist introverted nerd and a cat lover

2019-11-16 JoinedTunisia
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  • MedDS
    MedDS2yr
    Commented

    they have* guns!

    'This is bad. Are they dangerous? They bring guns!' 
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    I Become Baby Mafia Boss
    Fantasy · Zehell2218
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  • MedDS
    MedDS2yr
    Replied to Kyrtap

    good? questionable killing the demon king ? true

    "We have a winner! Eiro Jura Daemonherz has been officially chosen as one of the Hero's Companions!" An announcement was called out throughout the arena and its surrounding areas through the use of magic, and the audience erupted into loud cheers. So for now, Eiro of course had to put on a bit of a show. He waved at the audience, and he held a small speech. This time, he didn't do anything to shock the audience, but rather tried to put on the act of a truly good-natured man that wanted to do nothing but put his life on the line to help kill the Monster King.
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    Demon's Virtue
    Fantasy · DiceVR
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  • MedDS
    MedDS2yr
    Replied to Monochrome_Panda

    make sure to destroy the soul you do not want some pesky immortal roaming around

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    Inventors system
    Fantasy · lazy_wanderer
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Replied to Miko_Sayaki

    it feels forced and exposition_y

    The masked man just waved his hand at him, and said, "Don't worry about it, Halvazar. I was just testing him. As I said before, everything I'm doing to him right now is but a test. He can never beat me, or any of my subordinates, with his current measly strength. And I purposely told you to just use a flame skeleton so that he could beat it, but I guess he still needed help from other people. Don't act on your own for now, wait for my orders. I'll have one of Derillia's servants test him next."
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    The Auguste (Indefinite Hiatus)
    Eastern · Miko_Sayaki
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Replied to Benrex777

    they had religion before the catalisme

    Why are the monsters of the third strata called demons? This is a question frequently asked of me by those unfamiliar with that particular strata, or less well read on monsters in general. It's a general misconception that it was the civilised races of Pangera that designated the monsters of the third strata as 'demons', as a response to the particularly intelligent cruelty inherent in the more highly evolved monsters encountered there. This simply isn't so. It was, in fact, the System itself that assigned the name of demon to those monsters, probably long before any surface being encountered and slew one.
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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Commented

    i don t know why but this whole part from the begining feels off not in the story sense but the way it is phrased and written

    The masked man just waved his hand at him, and said, "Don't worry about it, Halvazar. I was just testing him. As I said before, everything I'm doing to him right now is but a test. He can never beat me, or any of my subordinates, with his current measly strength. And I purposely told you to just use a flame skeleton so that he could beat it, but I guess he still needed help from other people. Don't act on your own for now, wait for my orders. I'll have one of Derillia's servants test him next."
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    The Auguste (Indefinite Hiatus)
    Eastern · Miko_Sayaki
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Replied to ObamaUchiha

    read the birth of the demonic sword it is a great cultivation story and has 3 daily updates exept 1day/2months

    The 12 Cultivation Stages are: Mana Gathering - Foundation Establishment - Rainbow Core – Soul Detachment – Nascent Soul – Imprisonment – Rebirth – Adolescence – False Maturity - True Maturity – and Senescence.
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    The Auguste (Indefinite Hiatus)
    Eastern · Miko_Sayaki
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Commented

    don t make the harem any bigger I feel like he has chemistry only with morridia and the eldrich horror

    Ch 169 Chapter 169 Heh 69
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    Ascension of the elder
    Fantasy · Belial232
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Commented

    nice

    Chapter 169 Heh 69
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    Ascension of the elder
    Fantasy · Belial232
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Commented

    stop using "!" for every phrase it is anoying

    Liu Ying clicked her tongue and jumped back. Unfortunately for her, the abomination was a peak A-Rank creature! Even without the ability to devour mana, it was much stronger and faster than Liu Ying!
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    Science/Magic
    Fantasy · Aidka
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Replied to Rowanhhh

    if he wants to he can reach godhood this instant by destroying all bariers using his soul power so he is already limiting his progress

    Kyle put this out to her but what he didn't say was that the minimum age to break through to the second stage was 15, this was to allow the body time to adjust to their existing powers and Kyle didn't know what changes would occur once they broke through hence he was limiting everyone's progress including his own.
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    Ascension of the elder
    Fantasy · Belial232
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Replied to Heavenly_Cauldron

    I think in our world people knew about prisms before we could make them in the 15 hundreds because of naturally existing crystals

    These steeds weren't horses like what is present in our world. Rather they were demonic beasts called prism runners. They were four legged equine looking animals but they had scale like armour on their heads, necks and sides and their legs appeared to be coated in some kind of crystal. They had good strength and endurance but they weren't capable of fighting without assistance. Kyle thought the name was due to their speed and also to the varying hues of their scales which changed as the light hit them. Once they had finished they headed out of the gate while being bowed to by the gate guards.
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    Ascension of the elder
    Fantasy · Belial232
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Replied to Klemantoni

    science termonoligy is like that because most things are named before we fully understand them. so by saying mutation he might mean the mist that is inside "mutants"

    Amazonians were one of the strongest humans Acheron has ever seen… Yes, 'humans' and not mutants. Acheron researched the Amazonian people long ago and found no unnatural mutations in Amazonian's DNA. Meaning that the Amazonians were a product of evolution and not a sudden mutation at birth, like most mutants.
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    The Immortal Mutant Teen
    Urban · AinzOolGown0601
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Commented

    okay this is not dialog it is exposition

    "But Nurlak is it true what they say? That before the war, the warband will host the grand plain warrior games, and the best warrior who comes out on top would not only be the next head of the warband, but will also be given the half orc/ half snow elf daughter of the old chief for a wife. She's the most beautiful orc in all of the land, from the foot of the Breone mountains, across the savage plains, to the diamond desert, none can compare to her beauty... a beauty that orcs like me can only dream of but can't touch." The small orc said as his voice became incredibly somber, however the Orc called Nurlak smashed his palm on the back of the small orc and said to him with a smile.
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    Necron: The Legend Of Rezar DeathWind
    Games · Anone
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Commented

    You know how to let a fight flow but please try to use less repetetion. you used "when" 3 or 4 times and using middle school language ( don't take it to heart and sorry if I seem mean I didn't intended to appear so )

    Ch 232 Team Leader (2)
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    Science/Magic
    Fantasy · Aidka
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Replied to Wertiger

    I would be so angsty like somebody a day younger than me can bend the law nature but you can't do sh*t

    Particles of light began to appear all over the world, and the children who were born from that day, they were born with special powers to control the elements.
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    Project: Mage - The Frugal Mage
    Fantasy · _chomps
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Replied to Anone

    sorry didn't know

    Ch 136 War Bends to Us, Life Falls for Us, and Death Smiles For Us
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    Necron: The Legend Of Rezar DeathWind
    Games · Anone
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  • MedDS
    MedDS3yr
    Commented

    you can delete the chapter it self

    Ch 136 War Bends to Us, Life Falls for Us, and Death Smiles For Us
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    Necron: The Legend Of Rezar DeathWind
    Games · Anone
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