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wiko_5282mthCommentedsingle no harem
This book has been deleted.- wiko_5281yrReplied to bluS24
i trink it is more like losing controll becouse his body is already rubber so if you take a Power wich doesnt permanently changes the body like Nico Robins fruit she would "lose" her powers
This paragraph has been deleted. - wiko_5281yrReplied to Tommorow
the seastone handcuffs where not pure thats why he was able to move so well
" Like come on, a devil fruit user loses the ability to command his powers, his complete energy is drained and he becomes so helpless he can't even move, that's obviously an emergency shutdown mechanism. " - wiko_5282yrReplied to UrizenVergil
the blade covered itself with haki like enma did
Asahi glowed brightly as it vibrated loudly, sucking in Terumi's Haoshoku Haki and wrapping itself tightly with it, forming a whirlpool of flaming energy. - wiko_5282yrReplied to Erluna
We where never told only that it is modern
A steel behemoth-like battleship sails on the sea, in the control room of the battleship, two girls could be seen. - wiko_5282yrCommented
thx for the chapter ^^
This chapter has been deleted. - wiko_5282yrReplied to Lord_Nuxanor
The Nara is strong in him 😂
Sokka just laid on the ground. No one was there with him as he sighed. "This is troublesome…" - wiko_5282yrReplied to Asura_Vajra
that one made me lough thx XD
But now, looking at Rory who is completely comfortable and happy even though they are heading towards something that might kill them, she is now sure, that Rory has some screws loose in her head. - wiko_5282yrCommentedCh 9 Chapter 8
- wiko_5282yrReplied to Puzzle1231Ch 19 Chapter 019: The Navy is Here!
- wiko_5282yrReplied to GhastlyClown6762
Nice i like it ^^
So I finally chose a weapon for MC. - wiko_5282yrCommented
In Germany, Little kids say they went lulu when they went to the bathroom so it is kind of weird reding it as a nickname XD
"Hmm~ How about I give you a choice. LuLu or Luey?" Toph asked. - wiko_5282yrCommentedCh 20 Descending into the Bloody Mist
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For ur fight Scene I would say it was ok there would only be one thing I would change and that is to not describe holding back and stuff like that with percentages Inpersonaly think it would sound netter if u write stuff like: Now I will stop holding back, To test his strength I will go easy on him, I am surprised I have to go serious to beat him Stuff like that
This chapter has been deleted. - wiko_5282yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- wiko_5282yrReplied to unIReap
And who said he needs to do it like that?
QUEST : Eliminate the bandit group (70/70) - wiko_5282yrCommentedCh 9 Whiskey Peak II