Johnny_G

i feel dumb for writing this but could get an educated helping hand to explain why he just said velocity?

i wanted so bad to like this book, but even after half and skipping some that was just plan cringe i still couldnt like it. Pls re do this book or make a new one

This story is very good so far and I sincerely hope that the author will continue no matter what feedback they get. I believe this novel could go far if the author finishes the book all the way through.

NANI?!?!

actually it is a word it means to "laugh in a half-suppressed, typically scornful way" so please stop making assumtions about people without facts

he is being truthful, he lacks the OP protagonist-jutsu

Really enjoy the story so far, think there needs to be more attention to world background but besides that it's a splendid novel so far and i hope to be able to read more

i dont know why the fuck you decided to delete it while i was reading it but it was just starting to get good hopefully you dont plan on writing more books if this is what your going to pull

Hope you continue to add to this as so far it is a very interesting a good, don't have really any good baki books so pls write more.........................

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