basically in dbz ki is lifeforce same as chackra in naruto. if someone uses a jutsu and they don't have enough chackra there dead in this novel ki is more dense than chackra but if used up ki can still keep u alive because ki regenerates more thick key

Take your time not gonna lie this is my favorite RWBY novel I've read, keep up the good work 👍 👏 👌 🙌 😀 💪

Thanks for the update absolutely love this novel.

I hope this novel doesn't get dropped everytime ban is in a novel it gets good and the author drops it so I support this novel 👍

wait what happened with Lola?

sorry...was ranting but I hope it gets better. I'm cool with the the novel though.

really good is what I meant

finally!!!! a new chapter been waiting for this for awhile. I'm just glad you might continue it because it's really. keep up the good work and if anyone has negativity about this book ignore them they like to complain, but if it's actual input to help u learn from it. I think this is a great ff and many do to so do your best

that's the main chick sword in Sword ar online

This novel is the one I'm always looking forward to read. the concept is going by the main story, but with a twist making integrate really well.

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This is the best chapter I've read. Good work can't wait for what's next

Love a fanfic of naruto having family but neglected then turn around and give them a wuxia face slap.

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I've read your man plus overalls but get your stuff together because it could be great but u keep redoing

make sure to put pov please, because some might be confused

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you just need to scrap this or edit the first few chapters. first fanfic I've read having zoro being the main template

loving the work

I honestly like the first one but I like the under dog so give it a chance to now what u want to do and the 2 would be great