I really like it. It's not a bad story I suppose. The only thing that I wasn't sure about was everything after the first 12 chapters. Like the story spends 12 chapters setting something up and then throws that out the window for some reason. It took some time to get used to but I really like it yeah.

The First Page Turns 6d All Affinities So Far 1h Volume 1 1 Sneering Start (Chapter Zero) 6d 2 A Girl Named Brave Larison 6d 3 Ghosts 6d 4 A Mare Was Born 6d 5 When Destiny Comes Knocking 6d 6 The Man In The Suit 6d 7 The Wake 6d 8 Imp 5d 9 Scarlet Strings 4d 10 Learning About Blood 2d 11 Cov Lin 2d 12 Trouble 1h 13 Kale Pluto 1h