Shadowmere? Is that you?

I have to say that I hope everything goes well with you, your living situation and snowball! Your writing has been one of several lights that has gotten me through some dark times, and I have loved all the twists and turns, Savana’s mom included. I look forward to any future work you do writing and while I hope to see the end of this story life comes first. Take time you need and know that you bring value and life and love to those around you and your siblings no matter what your toxic mother says.

So I’m feeling a new nightmare arch and saint sunless, with sovereigns annoyed that our favorite corhort becoming saints without being under their command things are gonna be crazy

Every time I get cliffhangers and then see guilty saying “one today 3 tomorrow” I get such mixed feelings I look forward to tomorrow but the frustration of today is real!

I think this is a typo, shouldn’t it be the demonic faction va light faction?

It’s always refreshing when sunny can take nephis off guard

This book has a lot of potential, intriguing concept an characters! I recommend it and hope the author keeps up the great storytelling!

So what do you mean when you say “visage of a reaper”? There has been several depictions in history. Is it like a skull faced mask or more like a dark hood that conceals his entire face?

Some form of shapeshifting? While he can rely on minions for some things being able to have a smaller form or a humanoid form allows for greater finesse when something that can’t be left to his minions comes up

I think you mean invisible instead of invincible, in this context invincible means they turned undefeatable instead of unseen

Every new chapter shows how flavorful and rich their relationships are and seeing it done this well further highlights how tone deaf other authors can be to this. Keep up the amazing work!

If the full extent of his abilities ever get found out by the explorers he would be SSS rank easy, he could create natives in a world and easily gain resources for or information for explorers while getting stronger himself.

This sounds strange, usually in English you turn on a television rather then opening it

Getting Witcher vibes now this is the main idea On how witcher potions work they are toxic to normal people and have minimal side effects on witchers

Use can instead of couldn’t. in English 2 negitives make a positive so the sentence as written makes it seem like she can explain whats there without opening the door which clearly wasn’t the intention with the context

I am heartbroken hearing that this was dropped. I felt it was unique and interesting compared to the same garbage that is all that is found on most of Webnovel. Thank you for some of the best hitting chapters and most intresting content I’ve had in a long time.

I wanted to like this, the initial power set was one I have been looking for for a while in a protagonist teleportation and spacial powers aside though the rest left me unimpressed. Even though the inital set up is very similar to others in the same genere the rest feels way too inconsistent. The mc that we are supposed to care about claims he is weak and struggling and his body and constitution keeps him from leveling in the beginning but with how fast he gains overpowered abilities and other skills on a silver platter it’s hard to sympathize wit him at all, and without that connection then the tropes stand out in all the bad ways. I only made it 20 chapters but with how much deus ex machina and convenient powers he gets after each time the author hand waves the passage of time away and does a training montage(3-5 in the first 20 chaps alone) it feels less like a fleshed out char and more like a idiot with cool abilities. Good luck author I hope that your story goes well but I’m getting off here.

Thank you for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!