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Kuro_Kaen

Kuro_Kaen

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Amateur Novelist | 15 years old | Otaku | hoping I can write something awesome

2019-11-14 JoinedUnited States
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  • Kuro_Kaen
    Kuro_Kaen2mth
    Replied to CliffkunLolRekt

    I think I’m past thirty chapters now

    Ch 7 My Life as an Adventurer
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  • Kuro_Kaen
    Kuro_Kaen4mth
    Commented

    I've already seen this in the original anime. You can't just use their development that was already used in their original show and call it development.

    Ch 157 I can't lie....
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  • Kuro_Kaen
    Kuro_Kaen4mth
    Posted

    This is my final review. After about 200 chapters, I've decided that there is no hope for me enjoying this series. If this is being written by a foreigner, then I can understand the bad english grammar. If not, then this person clearly doesn't care. I've also heard that this was plagiarized(allegedly), so that might also explain it. The story is a nice concept (unless it was plagiarized), but it doesn't succeed because of lazy writing. The characters are all too accepting of the whole group chat and anime thing and look like cardboard cutouts to me. The author just uses their information from their respected anime series as an excuse for development. While I do love Haru (Yosuga no Sora) and Kuroneko (Oreimo), you can't just take what I already know about them and use it as development without adding anything new to it. Updates are good and frequent, but that kinda proves my point of the author no really caring. The only thing that this series has going for it are the many references and that's it. I was bored when I was reading most of it. 2.2 stars from me.

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  • Kuro_Kaen
    Kuro_Kaen4mth
    Replied to OverlordAinz1

    I never planned on doing anything wholesome, so the darkness won't stop

    Ch 58 Don't Blame Yourself
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  • Kuro_Kaen
    Kuro_Kaen4mth
    Replied to soulla

    Thx. I'll be sure to take note of that. I always appreciate the help that I can get.

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  • Kuro_Kaen
    Kuro_Kaen4mth
    Replied to Wallabalooza

    I always get mad when people criticize a story for being "unrealistic," but you criticized mostly the characters' unrealistic actions than you did the story itself. I can agree with you on that.

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  • Kuro_Kaen
    Kuro_Kaen4mth
    Replied to Wallabalooza

    I always get mad when people criticize a story for being "unrealistic," but you criticized mostly the characters' unrealistic actions than you did the story itself. I can agree with you on that.

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