Kuro_Kaen

Throughout this Webnovel, there will be edits and changes in the story whenever I think it helps fit into the story I want to make. This is basically like a rough draft for when I write this thing on paper

Honestly, this might be my worst story. But hey, that’s ok. You see your mistakes and then you learn and adapt from them. Simple as that. Hopefully I can see this as a good learning experience and write something even better for you guys in the future!

Looks intriguing

So much for trying to avoid cliche writin….

Too many element….

What i do wrong?

Its only the second chapte….

I think I’m past thirty chapters now

I've already seen this in the original anime. You can't just use their development that was already used in their original show and call it development.

This is my final review. After about 200 chapters, I've decided that there is no hope for me enjoying this series. If this is being written by a foreigner, then I can understand the bad english grammar. If not, then this person clearly doesn't care. I've also heard that this was plagiarized(allegedly), so that might also explain it. The story is a nice concept (unless it was plagiarized), but it doesn't succeed because of lazy writing. The characters are all too accepting of the whole group chat and anime thing and look like cardboard cutouts to me. The author just uses their information from their respected anime series as an excuse for development. While I do love Haru (Yosuga no Sora) and Kuroneko (Oreimo), you can't just take what I already know about them and use it as development without adding anything new to it. Updates are good and frequent, but that kinda proves my point of the author no really caring. The only thing that this series has going for it are the many references and that's it. I was bored when I was reading most of it. 2.2 stars from me.