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we can work through reading the flowery word but please change the way they communicate coz no one speaks like this. I enjoy reading the book but its getting cringy
a bit of a reach but still works, Logically top 50 is the right estimation coz u can't say she is as strong as Kaiden
there goes any possibility of him becoming true alpha, may I ask y the change?
from all the inbreeding🤣
debruyne and Halaand type duo
silverwing is defo not big he got one shot by verthimor
this line is from designated survivor
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Hey so I just finished the Tokyo revengers manga and I've been looking for a decent TR ff, the first chapter is very good, interesting approach and not just some transmigration. I'm really looking forward to more chapters, it has a lot of promise. a few grammatical errors but shouldn't be too much of a problem.
Seriously, I was originally excited but all of this is just basically a whitewashed version of G.O.A.T, no shade but the lack of originality and the fact that ur not even trying to add ur own twist to ur work is just sad. Even the first elixirs he got is the same as the other novel. I hope ur new chapters won't be more copy pasted/paraphrased stuff.