I know right! it happens un all the fanfics, they always head to the ORC to meet the devils, even in fics where they don't like them. Why is it never like "I ain't moving from NY place to meet someone, if she wants to meet me she can come here!"

Please tell me it is Adam x Ur or Adam x Ur x Lilia. That would be spectacular.

I legit thought that he'd bond with balerion and use his powers to heal it, maybe even give it a shimmer boost.

Excalibur: the last phantasm Enkidu: the chains of heaven and the black barrel. if I'm not wrong

he is going to madara them isnt he?!!! :)

yes please

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beautiful!!! I want Moar!!!

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axel seems to be the kind of guy to remember that rose threatened him to come to that compartment in a previous chapter. please make him hold a grudge and not trust her. . one scenario can be like this. axel doesn't trust rose and wants nothing to do with her but her threat is in the front of his mind and he forces himself to be nice to her. this niceness ends up making rose get a crush on him but axel just keeps on hating her even more. he wants nothing to do anything with her and her friends. this keeps happening until it boils over and explodes in a shouting match. axel leaves satisfied and rose heartbroken. this also makes him an enemy of the black except andromeda who is trying to help him he doesn't believe her.

the obito uchiha intangibility. I like it. pls do it

he is already creative. with this he would never be a one trick pony. +1

great premise. would be better in bnha where how many powers someone has is given attention to, with all for one and what not. still great work, hope to see more

why would he have to answer beyond the basics? he would be under no obligations to give them his life story or tell them his secrets. all other fics just have their mc tell ozpin and glynda their secrets, I hope you do something different. after answering some basic questions there is no need for him to tell them any more and he should have no need to explain his semblance. It doesnt matter that they want to know, he has a right to privacy and is under no obligation to tell two strangers about his powers

why would he have to answer beyond the basics? he would be under no obligations to give them his life story or tell them his secrets. all other fics just tell ozpin and glynda their secrets, I hope you do something different. it doesn't matter that they want to know, he has a right to his privacy and semblances originate from the soul, I doubt the people of remnant would go out and tell other people their's, so there is no reason for him to explain his

Mera and Karen please

one last thing. when jaune goes to another world, please don't have the other worlds freeze in time. if the time passes when he comes back new developments might occur at this way would be interesting. so yeah... no time freezing upon dimension traveling

in many other fics jaunes parents are stricter on him than on his sisters. if you want you can use this angle to build resentment between him and his parents after they refuse to train him. focus more on the wider world of remnant and not on the main cast in beacon add some world building. a character like your jaune has no need to go to beacon, he can save people on his own by just traveling.no need to train other's and give them powers and pls remove that time dilation thing. it removed all the stakes in the story. no need to make him ridiculously powerful and give him all manners of abilities. powers take time to train so you might want to give him a certain type of powers and stick with them. in this fic you gave him the bleeding edge iron man suit. but I dont think he even used it before combining it with the destroyer. if your gatch gives him something, try to have him you it. good luck on the rewrite I will read it when it comes out.

nick can probably adopt bell as his daughter. would be interesting dynamic between nick, Morgan and bell