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Marx_Cipriano

Marx_Cipriano

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2019-11-09 JoinedGlobal
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano1yr
    Replied to Poet_Legion

    great, now I don't have to worry about another protagonist going down the path of pathetic and lame human body

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    Rise Of The Worm Sovereign
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano1yr
    Replied to wajoli_zako

    first of all compare a human body and a dragon body humans have pathetic bodies and it's definitely not a good thing for him to turn into something as pathetic as a human body and human are not special

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    Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano1yr
    Commented

    this is quite relaxing and entertaining to read I expected it to be boring, but I'm surprised at how relaxing it is

    Ch 8 Body Switch
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    Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
    Eastern · Snoring_Panda
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano1yr
    Posted

    Good enough, good characters I like the story But there are some problems Too many unnecessary bits and too unnecessarily slow Like, it's satisfying to see crafting in detail, but it's repetitive and boring. It repeat in a cycle until there's no more joy in reading him craft things You should know when to write detail and when to NOT write in details Sometimes it's better to skip things and not focus on them You should know what parts of the story are not needed

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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
    Games · DiceVR
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano1yr
    Commented

    Unfortunately

    Ch 100 Survival (2)
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    The Pokemon Emissary Among Worlds
    Anime & Comics · sweet_and_sour143
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano1yr
    Replied to HaremQueen

    I stopped reading the moment he basically just became a glorified fuck stick

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    Journey Towards Greatness
    Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano1yr
    Posted

    (What I'm writing is my personal perspective over the progress of the story) Story is good What I don't like is the sudden shift of the mc's character into a lustful character That part of him is not well written and doesn't fit much into the story, it is a bit forced and unnecessary I used to like him, but man it didn't do him justice It's unbearable sometimes We don't need sex scenes, we need actual story and actions You're going far from the focus you set for yourself Frankly i find him unfaithful to his partners and the harem is turning from good to unbearably terrible

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    Journey Towards Greatness
    Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    Just a note, too much hormones will ruin this fan fiction

    Ch 1119 Julian Vs Olympia (1)
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    Journey Towards Greatness
    Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    Noice

    Ch 217 Solo Leveling
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    The Strongest Omni Traveler
    Anime & Comics · Magnus08
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    Ohhh my -sigh-

    Ch 100 Survival (2)
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    The Pokemon Emissary Among Worlds
    Anime & Comics · sweet_and_sour143
    detail
  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    Welp, I just wasted my time here, dang, like, seriously

    Ch 3 Getting stuff together
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    In the world of TDG as a Pokemon Master
    Anime & Comics · Ruxc
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    Ohh man, anyways that's just fine as long as the story is alive

    Ch 1 Re-Wright
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    Yautja/Alien Reincarnation
    Movies · Edge_Grayard8_Lord
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    Nice one

    Ch 17 Pidgey is Celebii?!!
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    Reincarnated As A Cheat Ditto In Pokemon
    Fantasy · Lordmaedan
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    I kinda of hmmm find Bulma really annoying, like that one relative that only wants to suck your money But I also find it as a good demonstration of the skill of the author. You know the author is great if they can write a reasonable hateful character Anyways I'm not a hater so please don't hate me Dang, I finally managed to catch up after reading a lot of chapters

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    Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Replied to bojken_thebutcher

    yeah They're like really annoying But it's only a part that shows the author's great skill at writing.

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    Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    hmm dunno what to say about this anymore, I like it but the way the women were describe is.....dunno anyways, I'll still continue reading

    Ch 1041 Interrogating The Woman
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    Journey Towards Greatness
    Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    that's why you don't let kids handle basically something that can be considered a killing machine

    Ch 20 20.1st Trainer Battle (1)
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    I Reincarnated as a Pokemon
    Anime & Comics · That_Guy68
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    fufufufufufufu noice one

    Ch 20 20.1st Trainer Battle (1)
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    I Reincarnated as a Pokemon
    Anime & Comics · That_Guy68
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    Nice one

    Ch 5 Trampling the weak
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    Reincarnated As A Cheat Ditto In Pokemon
    Fantasy · Lordmaedan
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  • Marx_Cipriano
    Marx_Cipriano2yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 213 Vermillion
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    The Strongest Omni Traveler
    Anime & Comics · Magnus08
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