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Normal territory. However, it didn't look particularly powerful yet. Can he add the ability to instantly resurrect those killed in his territory or summon everyone he has ever killed, like Yamamoto Genryusai? Although, in my opinion, it will be even more interesting if he can resurrect those who were killed by a prisoner of his domain. That is, to resurrect those killed not by Akira, but those who were killed by the domain victim. To face the ghosts of the past, so to speak. In the end, expanding the territory not only grants the guaranteed hit effect, but also expands the ability itself, giving it effects that the innate technique does not have. As with Gojo's endless void, which fills the enemy's mind with endless information, or Dagon's territory, which allows him to summon sea monsters.

It's a great chapter, but because of the ending, I have a couple of questions. Do you think, author, that Sukuna and Maharaja are weaker than Kokabiel? Gg reasoned as if he was putting them lower, like training bosses before a raid. Personally, I don't think these two are weaker, on the contrary. In my opinion, any of them will beat Kokabiel to death, but this is only my opinion. Sukuna has a technique that ignores the strength of the opponent, and Mahoraga has an adaptation to any opponent. I'm not saying that they would be top in DxD, but clearly higher ranked than any of the fallen angels. So I'll ask you again, do you consider these two weaker?

You should change the name of some skills, otherwise they sound a little silly. For example, "absolute awareness" should be renamed "Enlightenment", like the Buddha or something like that, "Revelation" or even "Eye of the Mind", sounds at least more pleasant. Well, body control. I saw a similar skill in one fanfiction, only with a more scientific description. Hyperkinetics is the enhanced development of a neural link between mental visualization and motor control. Increased accuracy, dexterity, balance, reaction time and predictive ability. That's how it was described in that fike. Why not adopt it? And there's not much to say about the plot itself, I like everything in principle.

Well, it's really not that bad. However, in the narrative, the hero describes himself too little. What does he feel when using the cursed energy? And the delight of incredible physical strength? Or how do Sukuna's skills manifest in him? He gets his memories, is it just a reflex or an instinct, how does it all feel? What does the hero think about the murders? How did he move so easily from thinking like a layman to a superman with incredible fighting skills and the ability to kill? Well, I mean, is it normal for him to wish others dead? Or is it more of a pretense?

In my opinion, you have reflected the character of young Gojo very well, if there are any inconsistencies, I did not notice them. His carefree, windy nature, a sense of his own omnipotence, more or less corresponds to the original, and what does not correspond is easily and logically attributed to a sharp change in the environment and gaining a new experience, which requires an appropriate reaction.

To be honest, the main character's thoughts are pretty stupid. How long has it been since he received his abilities? Two months? And during this time, he grew up to fight the higher demons alone, without his main strength. Against those demons that have been training for decades and reaching their level of strength. Demons with a powerful bloodline, teachers and inheritance, when as a hero there was none of this. I reached this level in two months. Yes, Akira is working on himself, but after all, others are also working. Other years are working on themselves, and he seems to want everything at once. I think Akira is a little drunk on his strength, or he's just a fool in life. He should have been a little more modest.

Stupidly. He could get the bloodline of the Dou God without a simulator. Unlike Jade Pupils. So he would have the opportunity to possess both. And about the fact that it would be difficult to explain to others. Why would he explain anything at all, it's his secret.

I know that this is the designation of the Golden Dawn. But these ranks also reflect the strength of the creature, albeit in a wide range, even in the same rank. I ask why the author believes that a Stingray can have a similar power rank? Nothing indicates this, except the dictates of the author's left heel. In the sense of Stingrays, it's not even close to Alistair in power.

Why is she a being of rank 7=4? I don't remember her blowing up the universe.

Where is the sequel? When will the new chapter be released?

Where is the sequel? When will the new chapter be released?

Keep writing this work

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Author, are you alive? I'm really worried.

No sequel planned?

Can anyone answer, is this work worth reading? I once read about the warlock, but I couldn't finish reading it, this world is too cruel. GG in the work is the same bastard as the original hero? Does everyone betray each other here, too? Does the hero have no friends or allies? I have enough black stuff in the real world, so I have no desire to read about it.

When will the sequel be released?

What is an organon?