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CrimsonThunder

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Rich young master with a Law abiding family. I live in Tijuana Mexico. I have six white horses named Juan and I am currently trying to buff them up and transform into Omega Juan (see profile pic).

2019-11-06 JoinedMexico
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder6mth
    Replied to VoidDrago

    No, he was just thinking about it.

    'Does he think of himself as Dumbledore, no one has the right to make me kneel, maybe Dumbledore, but that child has just pissed off the whole school with this single stunt. And if they all march in there to kill him, I wouldn't be surprised.'
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    The Exalted Evil
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder6mth
    Commented

    It would have been better if he hasked for the intelligence of a galvan.

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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Commented

    Let me ask you a question no one is asking. Why name the fic Gamer system, when it has 0 presence in the first 6 chapters.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Gamer System in Campione
    Anime & Comics · BrilliantDream
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Commented

    It has been wonderful reading up till now. But, what I want to ask is... Where the heck is the Gamer system. His progress as a gamer has been stumped and I haven't seen the system from chapters 16-17,

    Ch 25 Dreams…Sent Me A Sign Pt. 2
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    Game of Thrones: Champion of the Winter
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Commented

    I want to tell you that the siblings' relationship is perfect, and you can take the story far with their interactions. You don't need characters from the story to make it interesting. If you still want to be nosey and try to change Ichigo's life, but remember this, it will have no advantage because Isshin will still be alive and most readers will leave if you force a romantic plot. Anyway, it's your story write it however you like, I will still be reading it, cause I am enjoying it.

    Ch 20 Kidnapping
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    Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Commented

    It's good that she was ro@ped when she had such a good and capable son like you, she deserved it for giving birth to you.

    "Well, anyways, thanks for this pleasure. If you hadn't stolen my money, then your mother wouldn't have been raped. It's all your fault.."
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    Transmigrated With Cut and Paste.(Fixed.)
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Commented

    I was lost once, I didn't panic, I enjoyed two Ice-creams, bought some balloons, and then my mother found me. She said, "come let's go home" in a very relaxed manner. I think either she trusted me to do well on my own, keep in mind that I am the middle child, so she may have just forgotten about me.

    A little boy, who had just turned 9, was running along the night streets of London. His face showed fear and fatigue. He had been running around for the past 2 hours. He had gotten lost when he lost grip on his mom's hand while watching a parade on the street.
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Commented

    This surprisingly isn't cringe.

    „If you are in the wrong I'll scold you and even beat you up but I'd still be on your side and guard your back no matter against whom."
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    One Piece: Like father like son!
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Replied to grimmhorizon

    A hobbit lover? I don't understand.

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    The King of Magic.
    Book&Literature · CrimsonThunder
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Replied to WhyNotBacon

    If you read my previous stories, its in all of them, me pointing out the tags is for you to be warned and not read it.

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    The King of Magic.
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Replied to Lilith_Arescet

    Yeah, I understand the frustration when a mc doesn't have a good or relatable name.

    ■Leonidas.
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    The King of Magic.
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Replied to hammody836

    Obviously.

    Ch 8 Obey R18.
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    The King of Magic.
    Book&Literature · CrimsonThunder
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Replied to Lilith_Arescet

    Oh his middle name will remain the same, but don't worry I will play it off in such a way that you won't find ot awkward.

    ■Leonidas.
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Replied to hammody836

    I got you my guy, but you can't expect a 5 year old to be dominant, right? Plus, he has a lot of insecurities right now due to his small PP size

    Ch 8 Obey R18.
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    The King of Magic.
    Book&Literature · CrimsonThunder
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder7mth
    Replied to lassfried

    Wait, let me check, if this is true, then this changes everything!

    A/N: Sexy times coming, I just love when a female dominates a Shota, he will not get his dick hard and have sex as a five-year-old, but there will be other fun. Can you guys suggest some innovative restrictions, I will certainly appreciate them.
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder8mth
    Commented

    Acceptable punishment to Vegeta, since most of us reading are EdgeLords, it would have been better if you straight up killed him.

    Ch 31 Chapter 31
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    Reborn in Dragon Ball with Overhaul Quirk
    Anime & Comics · komega
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder8mth
    Commented

    Why is he so easygoing? If I remember correctly didn't he kill the two pink aliens for threatening his life and here Vegeta was attempting to kill his family alongside the city and he is still in a good mood. There is a limit of how relaxed a person can be, but our MC is a carpet rug and has become comfortable with people stepping on him so this sithation doesn't apply to a carpet rug.

    Ch 30 Chapter 30
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    Reborn in Dragon Ball with Overhaul Quirk
    Anime & Comics · komega
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder8mth
    Replied to Black_Raven_

    Yeah, the clapping dude has it.

    "Hmm, this is the second time I felt infinite destabilizing… very interesting" he said with a large grin
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder8mth
    Commented

    The rest of the name suggestions are lame, why don't you go with Exodus or Lunar or Artemis (Goddess of Moon, related to Saiyajins). IMO companies with Inc. or corp after their name don't look cool.

    In the week that followed I officially opened my business under the name of Brief Electronic Corporation. (I couldn't think of anything better.)
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  • CrimsonThunder
    CrimsonThunder8mth
    Replied to Abordoaj

    This is what you say to your first wife when you have already married the second one secretly.

    Just as she said that, I parked the car in front of her house, looking at her I said, "I'm going to say something I've already told Gwen too, I like you a lot, but I like Gwen a lot too, and I've kissed her too, I don't know what to do, I don't want to hurt anyone, but it seems impossible."
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    Anime & Comics · guiws16
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