I like it so far, but the chapters are too short. I hope the upcoming chapter will be lengthy. I love Alluric's character and can't wait to read more.

I find myself eagerly turning the pages, hungry for more of the tantalizing twists and turns that lie ahead. Each chapter leaves me with a sense of anticipation, and I'm constantly on the edge of my seat, waiting to see how the story unfolds. I can't wait for another chapter....ssly I love it

I love it when the male started to blush

hehe now this is fun

I love it when a woman is dominant rather than submissive... ;)

I will try my best to improve it. I genuinely appreciate your feedback. thanks!!

I really like this novel. I must say this novel has great potential. The best part about it is the detailing. I'm sure that the author spends a great amount of effort. Keep going author!!!

want more

The story is at a slow pace but that is what I love about it I read lots of novels and everything happens so fast that it is overwhelming for me. This novel has great potential. Keep going author.

Thanks, I hope you enjoy it.

Thank you!! I will try my best to improve it

I will give an honest review of this story. The first chapter pretty much gives you the idea what's made our ml so determined to participate in the game. The story took off from the second chapter. I love the idea of the manuscript and potion that his father left for him. Author writing quality is amazing.

Yeah I totally agree

thank god that ex husband is not ml...otherwise my whole youth will be wasted