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Larry_Bith

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith1mth
    Replied to BlackIight

    I agree but to be honest if I was really going to drop it I would have never made another post, as its been so long since the last chapter, I wouldn't want to get people's hopes up. Although it will be a long while before I come back to this story as I want it to be great. I want to get more experience with my new story, because although I will put plenty of time in effort into my new story, this story is my brainchild and something I really enjoyed writing, and wish to make as good as possible.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith2mth
    Posted

    Havent read it but the description seems promising, mainly leaving this review to let you know that you should title your chapters, as its a real turnoff for readers when chapters aren't titled.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Gabriel_Cabral

    Mou can't teleport others for the same reason the MC can't.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Narcox

    Its would be the same reason mc can't teleport them. To teleport someone else you have to be able to access their psychic energy and "drag" it with yours which isn't possible due to their core completely blocking most peoples psychic energy's off. If the others were even just budding psychic's mc could teleport one other because he would also have to stop their momentum. Also Moy can't learn teleport. I have pokemon learn a lot of moves they normally can't, which you will be seeing soon with more battles coming up, but teleport is a very rare move in this universe that only a few pokemon can learn.

    He would take the other passengers with him if he could, even if he didn't like them he wasn't heartless, but sadly just like how psychics couldn't mind read or control others if their core hadn't broken, neither could they teleport others.
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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Phantom_of_Death

    It's mostly sent by boat, and then car to where it need to go. Sending Mail is very expensive. It can be sent by plane or pokemon if it neeeds to get there fast but thats usually for important documents. Theirs usually a few strong people who transport mail between nearby towns. Also I mentioned phones earlier and just thought I should clarify that they work only in the city you are currently in. Due to this they are actually pretty rare and usually used when info needs to be transfered fast between officals in the same city.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Tito_Falxus

    I agree it was a little forced but what plane crash isn't completly random, couldn't think of a better way to make it happen.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Orthanos

    The plan crashed due to engine failure. They don't have parachutes on commercial airlines do they? This plane moves at multiple machs. Inside is safe due to tech but if jumping out you would just explode. No they wouldn't have. Although Moy has enough psychic energy to therotically do so, she wouldn't be able to freely control it well enough and although Daniel is strong he still can't lift a plane, together they might have been able to, but the planes falling so fast they wouldn't be able to get a good enough "grip" before it just crashes.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to DaoistwgQxZL

    Plane failures aren't really known because it is just assumed the plane was attacked and destroyed. I explained why no piolit pokemon in another comment. Satelites aren't a thing for reasons that will be explained. Due to no effective long range communication people don't know a plane is missing untill its not showed up. Travelling by plane is actually really cheap due to the dangers of it.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Phantom_of_Death

    The plane crashed due to engine failure. Piloits usually aren't trainers due to how increadibly complicated the aircraft are, they don't have time to raise anpokemon when learning to fly and after since their are so few piolits they are often busy flying. Side note the army man would have defintely had pokemon but they werent released because they wouldnt have been usefull.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Phantom_of_Death

    The flight won't be long enough where they have to release their pokemon. The size will defintly draw attention.

    Ch 19 Saying Goodbye
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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Readragon

    There now.

    Coming out of his musings he was shocked as he saw the white light fade. In front of them was a massive rock crab Meta, about double the size as she was as a crustle. It was low to the ground and an almost pitch black color with two stubby claws, better for defending than pinching. It had an extra pair of legs than the usual Mantor with six in total, plus it was much more crab like, with a more round than long body.
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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Commented

    Found this but completly forgot to put it here. The longer claw is like the shorter one.

    Coming out of his musings he was shocked as he saw the white light fade. In front of them was a massive rock crab Meta, about double the size as she was as a crustle. It was low to the ground and an almost pitch black color with two stubby claws, better for defending than pinching. It had an extra pair of legs than the usual Mantor with six in total, plus it was much more crab like, with a more round than long body.
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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Phantom_of_Death

    I try to do it once a day, but a lot of times it will most likely be once every two days. Should be a chapter in a few hours though! I'm working on it now.

    Ch 18 New Partner(s?)
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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Phantom_of_Death

    Not a bad idea and actually very similar with an idea I just came up with! It might be something I do in the future when she is a Torterra but she does not currently have the ground typing. Thanks for the idea!

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Phantom_of_Death

    I mean eventually but first she has to get to that size which is going to take a long while. At the point every increase in strength is slow so it will be a while. If I had to say she would reach that size by champion level which is still a longs way off. After that she will start growing even bigger, but keep in mind she would also quite literally be becoming a practical god at the same time. Is it so suprising she will get even bigger at that point?. How is she going to get anywhere without destroying everything? I have a couple ideas but we will have to see.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith3mth
    Replied to Phantom_of_Death

    Probaly bigger eventually but not for a while.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith4mth
    Commented

    Not my photo

    The egg, just like all the othes he had witnessed, burst into a white light and out flew a kid sized Honedge. Except it wasn't a normal Honedge, instead of the normal sword, it was a scythe fitted for the size of a young kid, with the signature honedge tassel hanging off its end, and an eye on both sides where the hilt would run through the blade.
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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith4mth
    Replied to NightOwl_Soren

    I did, but I was tired after writing the chapter and just wanted to post it. I read back through it again and fixed a lot of mistakes.

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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith4mth
    Replied to Readragon

    How did you find my notes? ;)

    With a sad voice Moy said "Sorry daddy, Moy is all good." Brightining up she continued, "Moy comprhended the most powerfull truth of all "The Fist is King", as long as Moy strikes hers foes hard enough, long enough, and enough enough, they shall all fall before her!"
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  • Larry_Bith
    Larry_Bith4mth
    Replied to BlackIight

    No she won't. It does happen at campion level but Moy won't be their when they leave.

    Still, even if his progress was amazing, Moy and Meta's is much more so. Starting off with Moy, although nothing big had yet to happen, it was about to. During this time Moy had finished remastering all her moves and training her resistances. But that didn't take too long with her talent. Instead during this whole time she had been simply increasing her strength. And due to that she was already almost at the peak quasi elite four, and would probaly be ready to evolve in a couple of weeks.
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