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Thanks so much! I'm glad to hear what you have to say about the pacing, I'm trying to take this story a little slower and go over things in more detail, but I was worried some people may not enjoy the slow pace.

This world isn't all sunshine and rainbows, the mc just doesn't realise it yet.

Thank you!

I agree but to be honest if I was really going to drop it I would have never made another post, as its been so long since the last chapter, I wouldn't want to get people's hopes up. Although it will be a long while before I come back to this story as I want it to be great. I want to get more experience with my new story, because although I will put plenty of time in effort into my new story, this story is my brainchild and something I really enjoyed writing, and wish to make as good as possible.

Havent read it but the description seems promising, mainly leaving this review to let you know that you should title your chapters, as its a real turnoff for readers when chapters aren't titled.

Mou can't teleport others for the same reason the MC can't.

Its would be the same reason mc can't teleport them. To teleport someone else you have to be able to access their psychic energy and "drag" it with yours which isn't possible due to their core completely blocking most peoples psychic energy's off. If the others were even just budding psychic's mc could teleport one other because he would also have to stop their momentum. Also Moy can't learn teleport. I have pokemon learn a lot of moves they normally can't, which you will be seeing soon with more battles coming up, but teleport is a very rare move in this universe that only a few pokemon can learn.

It's mostly sent by boat, and then car to where it need to go. Sending Mail is very expensive. It can be sent by plane or pokemon if it neeeds to get there fast but thats usually for important documents. Theirs usually a few strong people who transport mail between nearby towns. Also I mentioned phones earlier and just thought I should clarify that they work only in the city you are currently in. Due to this they are actually pretty rare and usually used when info needs to be transfered fast between officals in the same city.

I agree it was a little forced but what plane crash isn't completly random, couldn't think of a better way to make it happen.

The plan crashed due to engine failure. They don't have parachutes on commercial airlines do they? This plane moves at multiple machs. Inside is safe due to tech but if jumping out you would just explode. No they wouldn't have. Although Moy has enough psychic energy to therotically do so, she wouldn't be able to freely control it well enough and although Daniel is strong he still can't lift a plane, together they might have been able to, but the planes falling so fast they wouldn't be able to get a good enough "grip" before it just crashes.

Plane failures aren't really known because it is just assumed the plane was attacked and destroyed. I explained why no piolit pokemon in another comment. Satelites aren't a thing for reasons that will be explained. Due to no effective long range communication people don't know a plane is missing untill its not showed up. Travelling by plane is actually really cheap due to the dangers of it.

The plane crashed due to engine failure. Piloits usually aren't trainers due to how increadibly complicated the aircraft are, they don't have time to raise anpokemon when learning to fly and after since their are so few piolits they are often busy flying. Side note the army man would have defintely had pokemon but they werent released because they wouldnt have been usefull.

The flight won't be long enough where they have to release their pokemon. The size will defintly draw attention.

There now.

Found this but completly forgot to put it here. The longer claw is like the shorter one.

I try to do it once a day, but a lot of times it will most likely be once every two days. Should be a chapter in a few hours though! I'm working on it now.

Not a bad idea and actually very similar with an idea I just came up with! It might be something I do in the future when she is a Torterra but she does not currently have the ground typing. Thanks for the idea!

I mean eventually but first she has to get to that size which is going to take a long while. At the point every increase in strength is slow so it will be a while. If I had to say she would reach that size by champion level which is still a longs way off. After that she will start growing even bigger, but keep in mind she would also quite literally be becoming a practical god at the same time. Is it so suprising she will get even bigger at that point?. How is she going to get anywhere without destroying everything? I have a couple ideas but we will have to see.

Probaly bigger eventually but not for a while.