molovori

Okay, I agree that she wasn't raised like a normal girl, but romance novel or not, something like this should not be rushed as it will ruin the whole experience for readers. It just felt cringe. From the way he called her beautiful out of nowhere, my image of him came out a bit of a creep. I'm not hating on your work or anything I'm just trying to help out. Again, don't rush it, romance novel or not and wish-fullfillment or not. Let things build up and you'll have a story that will be satisfying to read.

This guy gets obsessive real fast.

So? Why is she just letting a complete stranger stroke her hips like that.

There is just no build up to it... This is just another one of those wish-lust-fullmentt fantasies of an author. Sigh....

Author, can you stop making him say his abilities name? It's slightly cringe and sounds like he is a chunibyo. Like naruto yelling Rasengan everytime he uses it.

Everyone is a hypocrite in some ways.

You don't have to say the ability...

Author, is there going to be romance or nah? The story is cool either way, I'm just curious.

You should start calling them by their actual Villain names. His name is Everyman. I keep getting confused on who you are talking about.

Gwen is nice. There is also Felicia Hardy (specifically **4 version, she hot af) , creating a chaotic duo with MC, would be fun to read. Jean is overdone and she is too emotional. Rogue, I don't know much about her personality, but I heard she is the most beautiful in Marvel. Jessica Jones would also be a fun read if the author gets her personality right. Scarlet Witch would be a bland duo. There are a lot the author can pair MC with, but he is probably planning on a harem so I'm just reading now until it goes downhill from there. If author changes his mind, then don't get MJ or Jean it's overdone or just completely boring.