trenten_perry

Thanks for the great chapter look forward to seeing the fanfic progress.

cuthulu sounds cool

no

look forward to the next chapter

the force to me is nothing more than a will whether you accept your actions and the emotions that come with it or fall to the darkside becomes the question to me balance in the force is balancing the dark and lightside of the force for without good there can be no evil without evil there can be no good.

Thanks for the chapter keep up the great work.

I look forward to seeing how it starts in his first world.

great chapter

great xhapter keep up thegreat work

It looks good so far I would give 5 stars but i wish to wait to see if you countinue it overall though I like the backstory for the first chapter I look forward to the next.