RuthlessOni
{Tsukuyomi} ”Now bend to my will! MMMWWWWHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!” to answer your question yes, I'm a big fan of Itachi.
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I was going to say place A/N at the end of chapter especially such a massive info dump and label (1) next to the paragraph to better the immersion but the grammar renders that a moot point.
Just skipped to chap 4, hope they arent to important. dont mind the gore and stuff just really wanted to get over the prologue. author if you see this could you tell me if its important or I should go back and read.
Use quotation marks “” when they speak (that includes whispers)
Wish it was: he agreed but inside, knowing it was a lie. But as long as he was okay then he would accept. Something like that, maybe a little investigation that ended with nothing, leaving it at just that. Something to make him look less idiotic, gullible, and having a properly functioning brain.
Wasnt it 5 or 6...
That would be badass especially if he open a space specifically on the persons heart.
Nope. I always thought he was a HE.
Okay... thats a bit cheap, only a thousand dollars. If it was a mil I’d consider it, still tho I couldnt, guess it depends on what kind of dog for me. If it was a scum bag of a human being, than fo sho a thousand I’d kill them.
...so confused
Why does this sound more of an A/N (authors note)
Lol are you telling me you have to be told to know the right gender?
Oooo Myyyyyyy Goddddddd Hooorrrreenndddooouuuussss Juuusssttt Stttoooppp ffs
Really...
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Nahh.....
Thats like saying, simple just dont feel pain, just dont have emotions, cause its as simple as turning a switch lol.
Yes but the difference is kids dont know better, where as the older you get the more aware you are to right and wrong.
Can’t believe this has to be explained...