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Melonpan5mthCommentedCh 92 Making Blueprints- Melonpan6mthCommentedCh 89 Meeting Rebecca’s Brother (Part 3)
- Melonpan6mthCommentedCh 89 Meeting Rebecca’s Brother (Part 3)
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well, biblically its a sin
'What could it be? My search history? No, although it's questionable, it's still not illegal.' - Melonpan8mthCommentedCh 74 Private Talk with Rebecca’s Father (Part 1)
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Before the chapter 99 where suddenly it feels Like the author forgot who this Story is about and where we get a new person we dont care about at all wasting tons of chapters instead of concentrating on the mc and the heroines. (At this point they arent all really there yet character wise). At some Chapters Author changes the names slightly and forgot how he named them when mc tells them their endings half of them are just forgotten.If he didnt just take in another character for whatever reason maybe it could have gotten good, but for me the quality dropped at around 100 so much i will not continue and cant recommend it.
- Melonpan10mthPosted
It hooked ne until the late 100s...definitely one of the better novels with good World building.Sex scenes exist but dont expect sth super spicy or kinky. Overall i somehow get the Feeling Something is Missing compared to som.other Villain novels. Some cliches are Here and There and Some Points were focused on top much or were at least uninteresting for me.Overall a 4/5 as a.villain novel which ist really is (MC doesnt try to be good and r*pes a Lot) and as a R-18 novel / adult novel a 3/5. A good read If you are bored.
- Melonpan11mthPosted
rarely leave a review, but Here I Had to. The novel is pretty good as of ch 179. The Protagonist ist similarly psychotic as in Villain Retirement and its Not a cliche Story of Villain trying to be good or sb reincarnating as Villain, but a Villain going back in time and Just trying to so better than He previously did while fighting His own madness
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*weebs
"I never expected to hear those words in real life…" Rudy removed Angelica's top and said, "Here I go." - Melonpan1yrReplied to xooos_1
all weeks need to unite and start the reincarnation project
"I never expected to hear those words in real life…" Rudy removed Angelica's top and said, "Here I go." - Melonpan1yrCommented
Literally had the same problem with a new phone...display defective and they wanted me to send it to china when it came from an eu warehouse
The charging port on Rudy's phone was defective. He bought this phone from a site that sold refurbished phones and received the faulty product. The return was available, but it charged extra for import, so he didn't bother exchanging it. - Melonpan1yrCommented
those cliche lines hurt...
"Gu Heng, a demonic cultivator like you is looking to die, you even dare to kidnap the daughter of someone with high status in the 6-door guild."