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  • goberrrr3727
    goberrrr37272yr
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    it just went down ! like srsly you are origin being tf you baby sitting males for get the harem and move on

    Ch 12 Rescue and Recruiting!
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  • goberrrr3727
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    it would be amazing to see akeno + nemuri + dora hahahaha 3 big pervs together

    Ch -4 Harem Members
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  • goberrrr3727
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    i read like 60-70 chapters thats almost quarter of the novel , and i have to say its pretty much full of nonsense , we have a MC who can do things like helping his parents to inc. their blood now thats cool but whats not cool is , he has to do this fancy red lines stunt to show his parents that he can do these kind of things just after being born , you might think this is awesome but if i say if we use little sense here , thats creepy ok like hella creepy because if your new born child can do weird red line stunts after being born you will either rush to church or some spiritual cult and say my child is possessed by evil spirits , if you are chinese than your parents might think you are genius born to rule the world ! china glory and brag about it to everyone on street. next is he is 6yr old , seduced someone twice the age , gave everyone bloodboost , manuals , talks to his parents about how his dad made his mom scream at night and whatnot , thats 6 yr old bro even sasuke sakura drama happened when they were older than this , and literally no one is questioning these things , where is that crazy danzo , hypocrit hokage ? the story is good no doubt but it is without any sense , full of loopholes and ofcourse MC brainwashing childs to be his lovers .... and mind you he is high on adrel. rush so when he is surrounded by ppl he still buys bloodline and whatever and merges with them cozzzzzz he cant wait to go home and do this he HAS to do it right now even if he gets exposed in short , MC is mediocre with not much EQ IQ but he is mf transverser with system so you know how that goes

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  • goberrrr3727
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    plz no venelana , she has 2 kids for gods sake plz political marriage ...... thats destroyer dude

    "Good… I am wanted to have a chat with you for our continued existence…" Venelana said and Grayfia already knew where this was going so she could only nod her head… 
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  • goberrrr3727
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    wow , met in the night , slept in the wild , next day lovers for life ..... all in span of a day , now thats life my friend

    Ch 33 Chapter 33-Who is My True Self?
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  • goberrrr3727
    goberrrr37272yr
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    infact rather than wasting time , if you can do something like a collision btw soul soc. and food wars world to let both side dragged in war with hallows and whole world gets to know about it , and then hella reo n gang step up on stage , i think it will be cool

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  • goberrrr3727
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    @author , bro no offence but now this arc is becoming too boring , its like this for last few chapters , you dont even have to focus just a glace and next pg that type , i mean i can understand if plot if difficult to make and stuff but it is getting dragged in some unnecessary interactions

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  • goberrrr3727
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    ooo god got emotional , damm author you write one shit in prev. paragraph and opposite shit in later paragraphs

    Looking at the weeping princess in front of him, Sullo could not help but sigh. His heart was slightly moved.
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  • goberrrr3727
    goberrrr37272yr
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    then make them genderless

    For a god, emotional entanglements in the mortal world had nothing to do with him.
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  • goberrrr3727
    goberrrr37272yr
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    why wont you buy something that can detact enemy like brooooo , @author what kind of mess you are writing , atleast give reasons for his choice

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  • goberrrr3727
    goberrrr37272yr
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    saviour of humanity , godson of creator of humanity , messihah of all will now walk his path of justice

    "Damn Dark Whisper Alliance, you are the scum of human history!"
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  • goberrrr3727
    goberrrr37272yr
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    and get killed by another human

    After he thought about it, Chen Feng shook his head and sighed. As a human, he was morally obligated to share the information. This could also be considered as contributing to humanity.
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  • goberrrr3727
    goberrrr37272yr
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    hey man , first of all , love your work man , keep it up , sec i wanted to ask if you can inc. the update freq of chapters

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  • goberrrr3727
    goberrrr37272yr
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    you know it adds bad taste of every side char. for little beauty you keep adding in the grp where ppl like ino hinata tsunade will be therr

    Ch 42 Scroll Steal
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  • goberrrr3727
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    you wont drop it you said , you will be out for a while you said , its been 2 yrs since last update 😆

    Ch 39 Author Note
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  • goberrrr3727
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    it is as if you are reading a chapter on your teacher's request and she said thank you to you and praised you n stuff 🤣🤣

    "Thank you for confessing to me. I really appreciate you loving me and I am not sure I love you as much as you do but if you are still willing to be with me then I will gladly take a beautiful women such as yourself as my lover." He answered smiling and opened his arms
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  • goberrrr3727
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    danzo waa busy with his bandaged hand

    His other love nest has become Ayame's ramen shop where he and the girls visit every day in the evening. She has already come in terms with her feelings and hopes to carry his child one day.
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  • goberrrr3727
    goberrrr37272yr
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    where is anbu , how could this go unnoticed esp. when naruto boi is little bro and third hokage dumbledore gramps gotta keep his eyes on him

    Due to her having byakugan, he taught her how to fight using it. She would use this time to practice her gentle fists and he would guide her through the sparring. If you evaluate her mastery of gentle fist then she would be a equivalent of grandmaster with all the enlightenment she got from Alex.
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  • goberrrr3727
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    well in these kind of ff , anything can work as long as final target is in the pocket of MC , i wont be surprised if MC came swinging like spidy and kicked the villian and flashed a smile to FL and after battle both go in hotel and voila love blooms coz MC spidy knight

    She was also the first one to admit her feelings for him when she confessed to him early in the morning at the day of his birthday. She then kissed him on the lips and gave him a nice looking dress as a birthday gift after she confessed. He also admitted his affection for her which caused her to smile in happiness. He also admitted to having a harem in the future which she readily accepted.
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  • goberrrr3727
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    he is a ninja for gods sake , still acting like a bitch hero saviour of mankind

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