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i read like 60-70 chapters thats almost quarter of the novel , and i have to say its pretty much full of nonsense , we have a MC who can do things like helping his parents to inc. their blood now thats cool but whats not cool is , he has to do this fancy red lines stunt to show his parents that he can do these kind of things just after being born , you might think this is awesome but if i say if we use little sense here , thats creepy ok like hella creepy because if your new born child can do weird red line stunts after being born you will either rush to church or some spiritual cult and say my child is possessed by evil spirits , if you are chinese than your parents might think you are genius born to rule the world ! china glory and brag about it to everyone on street. next is he is 6yr old , seduced someone twice the age , gave everyone bloodboost , manuals , talks to his parents about how his dad made his mom scream at night and whatnot , thats 6 yr old bro even sasuke sakura drama happened when they were older than this , and literally no one is questioning these things , where is that crazy danzo , hypocrit hokage ? the story is good no doubt but it is without any sense , full of loopholes and ofcourse MC brainwashing childs to be his lovers .... and mind you he is high on adrel. rush so when he is surrounded by ppl he still buys bloodline and whatever and merges with them cozzzzzz he cant wait to go home and do this he HAS to do it right now even if he gets exposed in short , MC is mediocre with not much EQ IQ but he is mf transverser with system so you know how that goes
plz no venelana , she has 2 kids for gods sake plz political marriage ...... thats destroyer dude
infact rather than wasting time , if you can do something like a collision btw soul soc. and food wars world to let both side dragged in war with hallows and whole world gets to know about it , and then hella reo n gang step up on stage , i think it will be cool
@author , bro no offence but now this arc is becoming too boring , its like this for last few chapters , you dont even have to focus just a glace and next pg that type , i mean i can understand if plot if difficult to make and stuff but it is getting dragged in some unnecessary interactions
ooo god got emotional , damm author you write one shit in prev. paragraph and opposite shit in later paragraphs
then make them genderless
why wont you buy something that can detact enemy like brooooo , @author what kind of mess you are writing , atleast give reasons for his choice
saviour of humanity , godson of creator of humanity , messihah of all will now walk his path of justice
and get killed by another human
hey man , first of all , love your work man , keep it up , sec i wanted to ask if you can inc. the update freq of chapters
it is as if you are reading a chapter on your teacher's request and she said thank you to you and praised you n stuff đ¤Łđ¤Ł
danzo waa busy with his bandaged hand
where is anbu , how could this go unnoticed esp. when naruto boi is little bro and third hokage dumbledore gramps gotta keep his eyes on him
well in these kind of ff , anything can work as long as final target is in the pocket of MC , i wont be surprised if MC came swinging like spidy and kicked the villian and flashed a smile to FL and after battle both go in hotel and voila love blooms coz MC spidy knight
he is a ninja for gods sake , still acting like a bitch hero saviour of mankind