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Laundry1yrPostedAt the beginning there are some really funny parts but later on it gets a bit dull. And his setting as a shameless mage is rarely brought up. It seems like just a side note to the rest of the events. Also it is NOT complete. It ends abruptly and the major plot points aren't resolved. On that note, the plot is all over the place. I'm not sure who half of the people are. Like, some new character shows up and they're instantly friends? No background or depth. I think it had potential but failed on the execution. Still an enjoyable read but it could've been even better.
- Laundry1yrCommentedCh 58 2.28 A Gift
- Laundry1yrCommentedCh 57 2.27 SSS Level
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The system's probably worried he'd want to stay in this world forever
[666: Because Host has been taking Theodore's blood regularly, the simulator comes up with another scenario to eliminate you, this overpowered character. Corruption is something that usually happens to low bred vampires, turning them deranged and the possibility of a pureblood getting it is very rare because they're almost immune to anything. They can only be corrupted when consumed by extreme negative emotions such as grief, rage or hatred. After that, purebloods usually choose a desolate place to pass their last days. Some even chose to self destruct and the power they hold is enough to cause a massive disaster. Actually, Raphael isn't capable of being corrupted otherwise he would already be gone for long but the world forces you so...yeah *nervous laugh*] - Laundry1yrCommented
He needs to keep talking to this God lady and have her show him different runes lol
[Congratulations, you have received a massive level upgrade. - Laundry1yrCommentedCh 35 The Origin of the Snowflake Lady
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Maybe something will change my mind but, I can't think of a great reason to ever curse a child. Those gods are kinda cruel
This paragraph has been deleted. - Laundry1yrCommentedCh 34 The Goddess of Winter
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Thank goodness!
But somehow not his. - Laundry1yrCommented
I'd like to see him try haha
Jeffrey was so angry that he laughed. In the whole continent, the only person who dared to behave this atrociously to him was Theodore. Everyone scrambled to please him because he was the most capable vampire hunter. Who did Theodore think he was? Nothing more than a useless, arrogant brat who couldn't even do anything without his servant. Exactly where did he get such courage? Wasn't he scared that Jeffrey would be enraged and then maliciously directed a wave of vampires to his side? Or did he not fear vampires at all? - Laundry1yrCommentedCh 8 The End is NeardetailThe Reborn Young Master's Guide to Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse BLFantasy · harutotreasure13
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Oooh will we get a flashback to the previous timeline at some point showing his reaction to our MC's death?
I wondered what happened to him after my death? Did he ever look for me? Does he even know I am dead; the person he promised to protect?detailThe Reborn Young Master's Guide to Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse BLFantasy · harutotreasure13 - Laundry1yrCommented
hehe
"I...I...Don't misunderstand!" Kyle shouted with a cute blush.detailThe Reborn Young Master's Guide to Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse BLFantasy · harutotreasure13 - Laundry1yrCommentedCh 7 Maxwell Boarding School for the Young and Rich Elites Part 2detailThe Reborn Young Master's Guide to Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse BLFantasy · harutotreasure13
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I have to say, I'd be a bit skeptical if my sibling or freind told me this.
The group glanced at each other and after coming to an agreement, James said, "We believe you."detailThe Reborn Young Master's Guide to Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse BLFantasy · harutotreasure13 - Laundry1yrCommentedCh 6 Maxwell Boarding School for the Young and Rich Elites Part 1detailThe Reborn Young Master's Guide to Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse BLFantasy · harutotreasure13