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TheDungeonChef10mthCommentedThis is the image you should see, not some blood sucking baby. Rather innocent, although it's hard to avoid the wording does make it seems as if the man is evil.
Upon his rescue, the baby was still licking his fingers and smiling jovially.- TheDungeonChef10mthCommented
I think it's a play on pineapple pen rhythmically
"I'm a handsome man and I collect ants! I hold a big bag and I got the biggest ants!" Han Sen began singing a favorite song of his, as he picked up the ants and stuffed them into a bag he had brought with him. - TheDungeonChef10mthCommented
what if it announced his actual name if he won lol
"Hopefully, I really can become a Son of God. It'd be a marvelous thing if I were to obtain a super spirit." Han Sen used his Beetle Knight to create a doppelganger, while he sneaked out on his own. - TheDungeonChef10mthCommented
Queen ships rise up, Queen is wife, Queen is life.
"Who is your wife?" Ji Yanran rolled her eyes, but she was super pleased on the inside. - TheDungeonChef10mthCommented
Honestly, at this point, it's sad. It's a flailing dying bear, with a hole in its brain. Where's the mercy blow.
The frosty bear was managing to pick up its pace, despite the pain it was enduring. The three of them were in tight pursuit, but they eventually lagged behind and felt themselves losing it. - TheDungeonChef10mthCommented
Dude, this guy is Ussop level funny/liar/comedy. He's only so new in recent chapters, but I frikken love him.
"Think about it! If people heard this, they'd assume we have swathes of elites in our ranks, enough so that we need at least thirteen generals to manage them all. And if I was the thirteenth, then people would naturally assume there were twelve others who were even stronger than me. We would become the bees-knees," Wang Yuhang explained, with a proud and boisterous expression smeared across his face. - TheDungeonChef10mthCommented"A loser, huh?" Han Sen lifted his lips but didn't say any more.
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goodness how nice would they be as a couple though. I ship them waaay more than school girl. Han needs a fighter by his side, and a lady whom also benefits from literally just his smell seems like the one.
"What plagues this woman's heart?" Seeing Queen's silhouette step forward, aloof, Han Sen could not help but sigh. - TheDungeonChef11mthCommented
Bring her home when you get mana for a guard dog. hahaha
Astaroth's mind went numb at the simplicity of the process. He kind of understood why White thought he would figure it out by himself. - TheDungeonChef11mthCommented
AYO
David started walking toward the man, keeping their eyes locked, his steps reverberating around them. For a moment, his eyes went from their normal white sclera and blue irises to black sclera with green irises. - TheDungeonChef11mthCommented
I love pineapple pizza. LIKE IF YOU AGREE!
He didn't know what Violette liked, so he ordered a half-and-half pizza, one side all dressed and the other pepperoni and cheese. He was tempted to order a Hawaiian pizza, but what if Violette was one of those 'pineapple on pizza' haters? - TheDungeonChef11mthCommented
That's a bit of an ego.
"Tsk. Guess they were faster than me on this. I'll have to have a little chat with Alex again." - TheDungeonChef11mthCommented
whoa... she instantly purged the impurities? she's so much more than the average.
Violette had to stop channeling, as she couldn't refrain from the sickness in her stomach anymore, which stemmed from too many Mana Siphons. She curled over and puked black gunk. - TheDungeonChef11mthCommentedThe ape king roared, pointing its meaty hand forward, as the smaller apes all charged forward. Astaroth uttered a guttural howl of his own, before dashing forward with enhanced speed.
- TheDungeonChef11mthCommented"Flash-fire Fist!" she yelled out, as all the flames on her body moved to her hand and shot out instantly.
- TheDungeonChef11mthReplied to GhostOwl
I think he said Alex was a good guy last time around, meaning Alex wasn't a nobody. I assume Alex would have been seriously injured and likely out of commission for far longer, perhaps making him take the game less seriously as he didn't win a way to live on it. Forcing Alex to slow grind into being stronger. David couldn't have known how important that helping him was, unless they were super close and it came up, but it's doubtful. It does seem he knew him in some way from before, though, and trusted him.
"Nah. I just didn't want to stand by while a poor chap was getting his ass whooped. No need to thank me. I would do the same for anyone." David explained, touring the penthouse. - TheDungeonChef11mthReplied to Galanar
the few times the novel has used very blatant names of things that already exist. Kloud Styph, Brawlhalla, etc.
The screen zoomed in on the segment on the right side. It had a title at the top, showing the name Brawlhalla. - TheDungeonChef11mthCommented
I understand the need to get a reference to something, it helps with imagery and can connect the reader to an idea, but honestly adding the actual name and not a clever spin on it really draws away from the individuality of the story. Where I do feel it has a lot of originality, these spots find it lacking. Even something like HallaBrawl ya know?
The screen zoomed in on the segment on the right side. It had a title at the top, showing the name Brawlhalla. - TheDungeonChef11mthCommented
Ayo. These old wizards are cold.
As he finished his plea, an icicle pierced his throat, making him choke on his own blood as the life faded away from his eyes. - TheDungeonChef11mthCommented
Hmmm. Ash elves are hated or worse is what I'm feeling. catch you, without us? I was assuming everyone in that village was also an ash elf. perhaps not.
"What matters is that a royal patrol should not catch you without us." He then said.