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Jessica_Hutcheson1yrCommentedI don't know why, but I can't stop laughing at this. And now strawberry milk is coming out of my nose. Surprisingly not painful?
She was...constipated? In his car?- Jessica_Hutcheson2yrCommented
I'd be scared to eat the vegetables. After all that spring water, music and incense, I expect those veggies developed spiritual consciousness.
And only one of them was a plate of vegetables. - Jessica_Hutcheson2yrReplied to ilyasful
I was 32D/32DD (still growing) at 13. Not sure if it's Caucasian genetics or maybe vanity sizing in US bras (I seriously think the sizing must be different)? In any case I can't get used to the sizes they consider "impressive" in C novels...
Zhong Qianqian had a pretty body when not compared to Zhong Nuannuan. At the very least, her breasts were close to a B cup, which was quite impressive on her slightly curvaceous body. - Jessica_Hutcheson2yrCommented
I, a woman, have said something similar before.
"Damn, I thought mine is already small but that gave me confidence!" - Jessica_Hutcheson2yrCommentedCh 130 4.43
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if the previous emperor is her grandfather and the duke is the grandson of the previous emperor's sister, that would make them second cousins (most recent shared relative is their great-grandparent). fyi- marriage between second cousins is legal (in the US) as the increased chance of birth defects is very small, unlike first cousins. that said, the royal family with repeated consanguineous marriages greatly increases the risk. Also wouldn't be surprised if they're double cousins (cousins on both sides)
Even though Duke Qu Xing Xu shared the same blood as the royal family, their relations were slightly distant as he was born from the previous emperor's younger sister who shared little blood from the current emperor. - Jessica_Hutcheson2yrCommented
but...a corset would make her waist stiff/hard rather than soft?
[Why is she so soft?] - Jessica_Hutcheson2yrCommented
classic (xianxia) plot device: a random group of demonic cultivators
A random group of demonic cultivars stormed the Qie Mansion and forcibly opened the labyrinth but this so-called labyrinth wasn't as simple as it seemed. It turns out it was the door to some type of underworld but this place was far worse than hell. - Jessica_Hutcheson2yrCommented
you only live once...though he has been through 4 virtual lives
After much appeasing, Qie Ranzhe finally agreed but he had a lot of conditions in place which included going to the so-called bridal chamber island the very next day. Wen Qinxi felt cold shivers down his spine thinking about the anxiety and thrill that came with having sex on the beach. Thinking one only lives once he agreed to it. In some way, he was sort of looking forward to it. - Jessica_Hutcheson2yrCommented
like the same aunty at a fish market that scolded them for following Zhao Huangzhi in the last world?
Wen Qinxi for the first time in his life felt like rolling his eyes but held back and said, "Of course, I am fuckin pregnant. I am a marked omega for heaven sake yet you had the balls to abduct me. What the fuck were you thinking?" said Wen Qinxi scolding him like an angry aunty at a fish market. - Jessica_Hutcheson3yrCommented
He had to "observe carefully" to realize a purple cat as tall as a house was different from normal cats? Guess a few hundred years in a shifting world with monsters will do that to you...
The big cat was at least six to seven meters tall, but it was currently sleeping on a moist gigantic stone. Wei Huo observed carefully and realized that the big cat was different from normal cats. Its fangs were long like a saber-toothed tiger, and it had dark purple fur. It looked very weird. - Jessica_Hutcheson3yrCommented
"long braid red hair" --> options below: - "long braided red hair" - "long red hair in a braid" or "long red hair in braids" (one braid or multiple braids? if you leave it at "braided" you don't have to specify) - "red hair in a long braid" or "red hair in long braids" - "braided long red hair" [Can you tell I'm procrastinating by looking for possible grammar edits in my favorite novel?]
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Yaya still suffering --> Yaya was still suffering
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"and really reluctant to consume" --> - "and feels really reluctant to consume" or - "and is really reluctant to consume"
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[Level Up Pill]: Increases the level of the one who eats it by 1 level.
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many of my blood --> much of my blood (many is for discrete/countable items)
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before bit --> before she bit
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"making the rumbling sounds" --> "made rumbling sounds"
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either: - "after entering her bedroom and lying down on her bed" or - "after she entered her bedroom and lay down on her bed"
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either "dizzy and nauseous" or "dizziness and nausea"
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