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Daoist8149412yrPostedusual nonsense book that doesn't make sense doesn't have great grammar or pacing without any explanation. just whisks the reader into random situations. I dont expect greatness from a non English source of books but there are lots of helpful grammar sites like grammarly that HELP YOU FOR FREE. not worth it. hurts my head to read
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35. "young". borrowed an egg. as far as I'm getting in this book
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I have mixed feelings mostly bad. the trauma the mc is put through is highly unrealistic and doesn't show the actual feelings the mc would have after a given situation. he tries to aquire money through a book even though he can just take it? also, as the second most powerful force in the book, he seems quite unintimidating. small details would make ti much better
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no vegetables. he would be dead of disease. unrealistic
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ridiculous. what replaces pain is rage. he would do anything to make his tormentors suffer too
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wish news was like that
"I have more than enough money to fund the projects I am juggling. News outlets should not be done to gain money. They should be there to inform people first and foremost. And so I am going to always be expecting to make a loss regarding the paper." I answered honestly. - Daoist8149413yrCommented
me at the dmv
Ch. 7 Meeting some government employees - Daoist8149413yrPosted
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this book is fantastic so far. plz take mandated breaks tho now that it's premium. I've seen almost every story degrade in quality after they do. quality over quantity is what's important to any serious reader
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uh no not if you just do your own thing
Yes, that is me, the chubby boy that everybody bullies for a single reason, I am ugly. - Daoist8149413yrCommented
I have heard this tho
"Hahahaha, look at the fatty wobble", "So ugly I would never date him", "URGH, he looks like a slug" ridicule the rest of the students in the corridor who were laughing at the poor me in the front of them. - Daoist8149413yrCommented
uh what I thought the story was really good??? sorry you feel like this...
Yeah. Yeah. I get it. This story is trash. Sorry for wasting your time then. - Daoist8149413yrCommented
with the current administration duh...
For that he will accept many things including the status of deserter, he didn't intend to stay in the United States after all... - Daoist8149413yrCommented
if you live in Boston im sorry for your struggles
Boston - Daoist8149413yrCommentedCh 71 The Semi-final - Part 2
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why the **** hasn't he absorbed anything its easy af
"A crystal!?", Van rushed towards the shining object, even using his superspeed to snatch it up. "It really is a Clear Crystal!", his voice turned louder as he placed the crystal in front of his face. He then looked around him by instinct, afraid that someone else was here, and saw him getting it. After a few seconds, he placed it in his pocket. Inside the pouch along with his other crystals. - Daoist8149413yrReplied to Noire_Nova
wrong. most humans are dumb and its only the hard working smart ones that carry us along. kill them kill modern civilization
"...Sorry, kid"