Author: Unintentionally makes the book longer Readers:

Would be kinda funny if that flag for future wars was just a red herring and this is the only war the kids get to join. I’d rather there are more wars since they are usually interesting but would be kinda funny since they said that

Just occured to me while reading but it was really nice that you used ”crunch” during the battle. it makes us unsure of whether the hit connected or not as opposed to the overused boom(or similar) that implies it got blocked or hit the ground. It made the fight feel more exciting while reading it since it didnt give it away immidiately. Small details like these no matter if you thought about it or not shows how great you have gotten at writing. Cant wait for next chp

you’re awesome :) looking forward to part 1

Dont confirm or deny but my current theory after hearing that gods and mortal experts both have veita in their eyes is that angels and demons are just another race like humans (just generally stronger) and that gods and demons counterpart are just the equvalent off human experts and they all have their variant of the ascention mentioned

I guess you could call this raining on his parade, golden rain for a golden man lol

Was the name Frihet from swedish? I’m from sweden so it is kinda cool to see one of my favorite authors use a swedish word as a name no matter if it is intentional or not

I must say you have gotten alot better at introducing worlds since AJ, I can already feel myself starting to get absorbed in the world and wanting to binge like 20chp in a row. Just know that we enjoy your works and look forward to the stories you want to tell, even though some of us isnt always vocal about it

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

Yea but he offered some of his wealth as tribute if I’m not missremembering and even a single coin wasted is worth mourning :P

So Olivers whole thing of giving up some treasure to get his territory extra favor has lost its effect huh, rip the wealth

I’m just imagining all the readers as ghosts floating around the room chanting ”fight” the whole time

I know just sounds more fun when you make comments almost true but not completely for some jokes, at least for me

Ouch, imagine being one of them three then overhearing Zelsh being like ”yea i belive Oli can 1v3 them later”

Lucky Oli huh, guess he will really get to experience the local cuisine of the worlds center of food. 100% ecological and grown nearby

Are you sure that Zelsh isnt related to Oli’s mothers side. Because I could have sworn that was Bradok wakeing him before Zelsh’s name came up

For some reason I get the feeling Oli has a new holiday trip planned...

Oli finally gets to meet his old gramps huh. Also guess we know where Rathe gets his drinking habits from XD

Zelsh with the good old bait and switch huh. Nice slap in Braks face, deserved