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YoeyH1yrReplied to Adore_Hymn_89What?! If someone makes a Survivor feel bad that person is awfull And if anyone takes it out on a Family member that still makes awful. Again this is not on the Victim at all.
Countless girls still do not dare to sacrifice and they should be understood. Others who are not the victim will never know how painful it is to face it.- YoeyH2yrReplied to madonna
first of All I have written my own stories with Characters that make sense with. That's why I am critical because I ama writer. Secondly anyone who would act so childish I wouldn't want to be friends with And Thirdly: The same way you came to express your Opinion. I have the exact freedom to express Mine. Gotroll Some one else
Ch 578 Finally Got to Eat Fish (3) - YoeyH2yrCommentedCh 1653 Giving Birth
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I truly loved this story. However I am a bit dissapointed in some of the plot holes in this second installment. In the first Series they made it Seem as though her Nlwe powers would play such a huge part in saving Zhi and in the end She used it only Once purposely; then the Clause of the player albeit a minor detail was Never explained either. 10/10 for the Romance of this story though
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Parker flung his behind😂😂😂
There was another piece of news about the production team that was very mild. It only received some attention because it was posted on the same day of Parker's accident: A certain staff member in the production team accidentally fell off from the third floor and suffered high paraplegia. - YoeyH2yrCommented
This is all so incredibly messy All because BQQ wanted to ect hot food outside on the ground while it's snowing. like Author I've been rocking w/ you this long but honestly make it make sense...
"You might be happy, but Winston is going to be embarrassed." Bai Qingqing didn't dare to go back to face him. - YoeyH2yrPosted
The story has great potential but the pacing of the story feels really rushed. Reading the story in - the beginning using apostrophe's to differentiate but the dialog between the FL and the inner voice would be very helpful. Slowing down the Pacing and giving more backround details about the immediate setting of the FL would also aid in the Story telling. overall I feel the Story has great bones bust a bit of Clean cup as it comes to syntax, background development, missing words/typos.
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The Previous Chapter is double up right here.
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Wait... Lex Luther is SuperMan Charles Xavieris X-Men... or was this suppose to be sarcasm?
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because this wasn't cringey at all....
"Oh! Your family is so rich. This bodyguard looks expensive. He's even taller than you and even more muscular than an African." Bai Xiaofan said in admiration, "To think he actually helped you eat dog food. Best bodyguard of the century!" - YoeyH2yrCommented
Okay, I melted!
"It is true when they said envy brings out the worst in you," he chuckled at the thought and took her hand which rested on her lap, "I want to steal away your smile so that it's just for me and no one else to see. Unlike other women you are pure, an untainted soul has captivated me." - YoeyH2yrCommented
It's so sad that "Blonde hair, Blue eyes" is the standard of beauty
It was as clear as day that both the sisters looked nothing like each other, not even close, not because they weren't blood-related buy because Heidi with her almost straight black hair and brown eyes with a pale skin was no match to Nora's beautiful blonde hair and blue eyes. Nora was much more beautiful and attractive, a woman which a man could notice from a far distance. Maybe the only good thing about Heidi's eyes was that in sunlight, her eyes seemed light hazel in colour. - YoeyH2yrCommented
I cannot express enough how much this line mache me laugh
"Winston is my papa?" asked Barron with a ridiculous look on his face. - YoeyH2yrCommented
Wow. Well this is Certainly messed up. Yikes !
Actually, she wasn't very satisfied with drawing as a profession. She still had a son. Many Chinese more or less favored boys over girls, and Mommy Bai was no exception. Although she didn't dote on her daughter any less compared to her son, she was much less strict when it came to the choice of careers. - YoeyH2yrCommented
The Way this just made me LAUGH😂😂😂😂😂😂😂Curtis said "He Bout That Life" 😂😂😂😂😂
Curtis rapped the steering wheel rhythmically as he said, "If I get stopped, I'll just abandon the car and flee. Those traffic police won't be able to catch me." - YoeyH2yrCommented
Honestly Why is Barron this way ?? you would theink by now he would understand better... Clearly not
"Step out, right now!" Greed urged Barron to get out and Barron tilted his head. - YoeyH2yrCommented
It's honestly What she deserved!
But Lucas who was a reaper, who belonged to the Grims, he had flicked her soul not just out of her body, but he had also thrown it in the land of the dead that would slowly have her crumble and turn without a piece of rest for her soul. - YoeyH2yrCommented
you love to Remember it !
Grace was Damien's half-blood sibling and he said, "I broke her fangs. For genuine reasons," he added and Belle looked taken aback by this. A vampire losing their fangs was considered to be the most shameful thing and for Damien to be the one to do it, she wondered what Grace had done. - YoeyH2yrCommented
Winston Is crying and Myheart just Fluttered. Winston is the best!
Bai Qingqing felt a scorching liquid landing on her shoulder, her skin having the delusion that it was scorched. She couldn't ignore it. This droplet then slid into her clothes down her skin, the temperature rapidly turning cold. However, it became so cold that her heart ached.