5951Otaku

Didn't notice any errors in writing quality so it reads well. This is a HP/DxD world. Group chat doesn't really do much besides just talking for a bit, no missions or visit so far. Story mostly takes place in HunterXHunter since he can hop worlds and he went there. no chat members are there. But this is a fun HxH story despite no big changes from canon and i like all the abilities that MC has. Review at chapter 40 ~92k word count. HP - I Got My Sacred Gear... and It Manifested as a Chat Group!? Author: OneTrueSage

I didn't notice any writing errors and it reads pretty well to me. I like his jump power and how there are limitation so he can't just instantly jump from world to world and has to speed some time before each jump. I like the MC personality he isn't evil but he isnt good. MC is more neutral, kills some people, save some people. Really depends on the benefit towards him. Doesn't seem like a harem. Sure he spends times with women on the worlds he visits but he doesn't bring them along and so far its only solo jumps. Review at chapter 40 ~180k word count. Average Omniversal Travel enjoyer Author: Evans_The_Writer

I'm guessing so he didn't have two characters named Daniel. 'Hi, Daniel my name is Daniel.' Reading is more fluid if you dont have multiple characters with the same name.

How dare you use Ai. Thats a cool picture!

I dont think so. Sometimes they had a weakness to flowing/running water so they couldn't cross like rivers and the sea/ocean.

Pretty neat so far. I like the MC and the gacha system. Since the gacha rewards are based off his level, MC doesn't actually get anything too OP so far. Some of the rewards he gets are pretty unique since I havent seen them in other stories which made this more fun to read. I don't remember seeing any grammar errors so pretty well written. Review at chapter 24 ~52k word count. Leveling Gacha In Marvel Author: Infamous_smile

sucks when you hit the lastest chapter and now you just gotta wait. I enjoyed this story for the most part minus a few bits but its good story so far and keep up the good work!

I like multiversal/dimensional merchant stories and this is one of them. Kinda slow but still fun. I like what he does/gets to get stronger. Also I saw some unique people/worlds he trades with that I havent seen in other fanfics which was nice. I don't remember seeing any errors so i'd say this is written pretty well. Review at chapter 119 ~125k word count. Harry Potter: Multiversal Merchant Author: loskro

At first I thought it was stupid he got screwed with a nerfed rinnegan because no chakra but you gave him a way to fix that and improve so I dont mind. Also I would totally start sacrificing villains for more power if that is allowed.